ThatGreatGuy1 Posted December 21, 2017 Share Posted December 21, 2017 (edited) Entry #2- Carol: Let it snow My version Let us go (to snowpoint temple) IGN TheGreatMe Spoiler Oh the hail outside is frightfulBut Snowpoint Temple is so delightful And since I just got my badgeLet us go! Let us go! Let us go!It looks like I'll be slidingAnd looking for pokemon who are hiding Down the staircase we go Let us go! Let us go! Let us go!When we finally get an encounterHow I'll love to see whats in store!But I can't believe my eyesAll the way down is a stormThe men are slowly dyingAnd, the Froslass , are now cryingBut after discovering why from the dexLet us go! Let us go! Let us go! Edited December 27, 2017 by ThatGreatGuy1 Laz, Johnnicles, TheGrey and 1 other 4 Link to comment
DarylDixon Posted December 28, 2017 Share Posted December 28, 2017 On 21/12/2017 at 12:12 AM, ThatGreatGuy1 said: Entry #1- Carol: Jingle Bells My version Ho-oh's bells IGN TheGreatMe Hide contents [Verse 1] Dashing through Mt Silver In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh Dodging the trainers we go Crying all the way Bells on Bell tower ring Making Red shine bright What fun it is to phone a friend To help me fight Red right [Chorus] Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells Ho-oh give me strength Oh what pain it is to ride In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh, hey Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells Ho-oh give me strength Oh what pain it is to ride In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh [Verse 2] A week or two ago I thought I'd take a hike And soon Champion Red Was right before my eyesMy team was not prepared Misfortune seemed my lot I got into a battle And then I got knocked out [Chorus] Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells Ho-oh give me strength Oh what pain it is to ride In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh, hey Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells Ho-oh give me strength Oh what pain it is to ride In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh [Verse 3]A week or two agoThe story I hate to tellI went out to Mt SilverAnd thought I was in hellThe boy was looking downWith a team of level 80sHe said no words as I whited outAnd let free a quiet sigh [Chorus] Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells Ho-oh give me strength Oh what pain it is to ride In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh, hey Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells Ho-oh give me strength Oh what pain it is to ride In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh [Verse 4] Now the grass is green And with Ho-oh on my team I think I can fulfil my dream And beat Red's evil team Just gotta get this right With no friends to help me fight Beat him with his own cheap tricks And bam, I'll win the fight [Chorus] Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells Ho-oh give me strength Oh what pain it is to ride In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh, hey Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells Ho-oh give me strength Oh what pain it is to ride In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh that's music for my ears hahha ThatGreatGuy1 1 Link to comment
Akshit Posted December 29, 2017 Share Posted December 29, 2017 (edited) IGN Akshit Original Carol: Let It Snow! Mewtwo No! Oh the humans think I'm woeful But they hurt other pokémons & are delightful And they scream when inside their pokéballs I don't go Mewtwo No! Mewtwo No! Mewtwo No! It's Christmas and my rage ain't stopping Must save my Ice brethren even if human heads go popping Begging for mercy when they feel the cold nice and slow Mewtwo No! Mewtwo No! Mewtwo No! Then Mew comes and tells me my justice ain't right How my hatred drives me & none is saved from the storm! But who'll stop me and dares to fight All my history I've always won Their cruelty finally slowly dying But, this world, want me say goodbying And now I control my anger and tell me so Mewtwo No! Mewtwo No! Mewtwo No! Edited December 29, 2017 by Akshit blackiye, AkileshX, xXBlu3BreathXx and 4 others 7 Link to comment
Noad Posted January 21, 2018 Author Share Posted January 21, 2018 A PokeMMO Christmas Carol The Results 1st Place - Johnnikles Always Christmas when your typing's Ice Video: Jynx used Sing, Lovely Kiss'ing. This Sheer Cold... is not "miss"ing. An Ice Heal, you'll buy, still won't thaw out tonight. It's winter outside, and our typing's "Ice." "Go Away," says the Grass type. Lapras is still using Freeze-Dry. A Weaville Ice Punch, a happy Snorunt. The snow is pouring, and our typing's "Ice." All the Spearow flew south for the Winter, Ursaring hibernates in a den. If he wakes up early, he'll say "No, sir." Toss and turn, and go to sleep again. Christmas time, we'll go take a break. We'll give gifts to all of our mates. Then the Twenty-Sixth, we'll go back to this: Reigning terror, 'cause our typing's "Ice." All the Murkrow flew south for a warm stall, All the Weedles are in diapause. Delibird is throwing all the snowballs, you'd better hope that there's a "Freezing" clause. When it ends, we're okaying. we can still go back to playing. We'll set up some Hail, and giggle and yell. It's always Christmas when your typing's "Ice." It's always Christmas when your typing's "Ice." It's always Christmas when your typing's "Ice!" Judges all agreed that this Johnnikles' lyrics flowed well with the rhythm of the original carol. We all really appreciated how much work and dedication went into this entry. I personally love how many Pokemon are included in this song, really fitting the brief to give an original carol a "Pokemon" makeover. This creative entry is deserving of first place, well done Johnnikles! 2nd Place - xSparkie Stantler the shiny NU You know Deerling, and Sawsbuck, and Bouffalant, and Tauros, Virizion, and Cobalion, and Terrakion and Keldeo But do you recall The most famous NU of all Stantler, the shiny NU had a very shiny pose and if you ever saw it you would even say it shows. All of the other NUs used to leer and mimic his name They never let poor Stantler play in any NU games. Then one foggy Christmas eve Bilburt came to say: "Stantler with my OT so great, won't you lead my team at eight?" Then all the NUs loved him as they psyched up with glee, Stantler the shiny NU, you'll win all the tournies! xSparkie submitted his entry first, judges felt this was really brave as there were no other entries to compare his own to. We all liked how the lyrics fit the story of the original carol and gave it top marks for originality. It was really close between this entry and the first place one and we all felt this entry was also a winner. Great entry xSparkie, we all enjoyed your entry a lot. 3rd Place - TheGreatMe Ho-Oh's Bells [Verse 1] Dashing through Mt Silver In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh Dodging the trainers we go Crying all the way Bells on Bell tower ring Making Red shine bright What fun it is to phone a friend To help me fight Red right [Chorus] Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells Ho-oh give me strength Oh what pain it is to ride In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh, hey Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells Ho-oh give me strength Oh what pain it is to ride In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh [Verse 2] A week or two ago I thought I'd take a hike And soon Champion Red Was right before my eyes My team was not prepared Misfortune seemed my lot I got into a battle And then I got knocked out [Chorus] Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells Ho-oh give me strength Oh what pain it is to ride In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh, hey Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells Ho-oh give me strength Oh what pain it is to ride In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh [Verse 3] A week or two ago The story I hate to tell I went out to Mt Silver And thought I was in hell The boy was looking down With a team of level 80s He said no words as I whited out And let free a quiet sigh [Chorus] Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells Ho-oh give me strength Oh what pain it is to ride In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh, hey Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells Ho-oh give me strength Oh what pain it is to ride In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh [Verse 4] Now the grass is green And with Ho-oh on my team I think I can fulfil my dream And beat Red's evil team Just gotta get this right With no friends to help me fight Beat him with his own cheap tricks And bam, I'll win the fight [Chorus] Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells Ho-oh give me strength Oh what pain it is to ride In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh, hey Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells Ho-oh give me strength Oh what pain it is to ride In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh Judges really enjoyed the connection to older generations of Pokemon games. We felt that Jingle Bells was one of the hardest carols to maintain a consistent flow and we feel that this entry did it justice. Overall a really good effort and an entertaining read! Noad's Honourable Mention(s) The honourable mention will receive a small token of my appreciation for their entry. Suneet On the first day of Christmas my true love sent to me: A Pidgey in a Pecha Tree On the second day of Christmas my true love sent to me: 2 Pidoves and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree On the third day of Christmas my true love sent to me: 3 Blazikens 2 Pidoves and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree On the fourth day of Christmas my true love sent to me: 4 Delibirds 3 Blazikens 2 Pidoves and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree On the fifth day of Christmas my true love sent to me: 5 Goldeeeeeeeeeeeeen 4 Delibirds 3 Blazikens 2 Pidoves and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree On the sixth day of Christmas my true love sent to me: 6 Combees Buzzing 5 Goldeeeeeeeeeeeeen 4 Delibirds 3 Blazikens 2 Pidoves and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree On the seventh day of Christmas my true love sent to me: 7 Swanna Swimming 6 Combees Buzzing 5 Goldeeeeeeeeeeeeen 4 Delibirds 3 Blazikens 2 Pidoves and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree On the eighth day of Christmas my true love sent to me: 8 Miltanks Mooing 7 Swanna Swimming 6 Combees Buzzing 5 Goldeeeeeeeeeeeeen 4 Delibirds 3 Blazikens 2 Pidoves and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree On the ninth day of Christmas my true love sent to me: 9 Froakies Singing 8 Miltanks Mooing 7 Swanna Swimming 6 Combees Buzzing 5 Goldeeeeeeeeeeeeen 4 Delibirds 3 Blazikens 2 Pidoves and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree On the tenth day of Christmas my true love sent to me: 10 Spoinks a Bouncing 9 Froakies Singing 8 Miltanks Mooing 7 Swanna Swimming 6 Combees Buzzing 5 Goldeeeeeeeeeeeeen 4 Delibirds 3 Blazikens 2 Pidoves and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree On the eleventh day of Christmas my true love sent to me: 11 Cloysters Clamping 10 Spoinks a Bouncing 9 Froakies Singing 8 Miltanks Mooing 7 Swanna Swimming 6 Combees Buzzing 5 Goldeeeeeeeeeeeeen 4 Delibirds 3 Blazikens 2 Pidoves and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree On the twelfth day of Christmas my true love sent to me: 12 Gurdurrs Lifting 11 Cloysters Clamping 10 Spoinks a Bouncing 9 Froakies Singing 8 Miltanks Mooing 7 Swanna Swimming 6 Combees Buzzing 5 Goldeeeeeeeeeeeeen 4 Delibirds 3 Blazikens 2 Pidoves and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree Overall I found this a really charming entry and it is paced very well, the Pokemon are well placed. I found this to be one of the most catchiest entries and even though the theme is Pokemon, it leaves you with a festive feeling. @ThatGreatGuy1 @Suneet @Johnnicles @xSparkie Suneet, Yohannovich, Johnnicles and 4 others 6 1 Link to comment
Johnnicles Posted January 21, 2018 Share Posted January 21, 2018 Omg, I won an event! LOL I'm so ecstatic right now! Thanks for the opportunity! I really enjoyed reading everyone's entries! Suneet, Noad, Staggiie and 1 other 4 Link to comment
Staggiie Posted January 22, 2018 Share Posted January 22, 2018 8 hours ago, Johnnicles said: Omg, I won an event! LOL I'm so ecstatic right now! Thanks for the opportunity! I really enjoyed reading everyone's entries! Congrats bb :3 Johnnicles 1 Link to comment
DrButler Posted January 22, 2018 Share Posted January 22, 2018 best poems rewarded with a wp, shame on you. Link to comment
ThatGreatGuy1 Posted January 22, 2018 Share Posted January 22, 2018 I am kinda shocked that I won at all as all of the entries I saw looked like they would blow mine out of the water! Congrats to the other winners and the honourable mention! Johnnicles and Suneet 2 Link to comment
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