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Entry  #2- Carol: Let it snow My version Let us go (to snowpoint temple) IGN TheGreatMe

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Oh the hail outside is frightful
But Snowpoint Temple is so delightful  
And since I just got my badge
Let us go! Let us go! Let us go!

It looks like I'll be sliding
And looking for pokemon who are hiding
Down the staircase we go 
Let us go! Let us go! Let us go!

When we finally get an encounter
How I'll love to see whats in store!
But I can't believe my eyes
All the way down is a storm

The men are slowly dying
And, the Froslass , are now crying
But after discovering why from the dex
Let us go! Let us go! Let us go!

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Entry #1- Carol: Jingle Bells My version Ho-oh's bells

IGN TheGreatMe

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[Verse 1]
Dashing through Mt Silver
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh
Dodging the trainers we go
Crying all the way
Bells on Bell tower ring
Making Red shine bright
What fun it is to phone a friend
To help me fight Red right

 

[Chorus]
Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells
Ho-oh give me strength
Oh what pain it is to ride
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh, hey
Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells
Ho-oh give me strength

Oh what pain it is to ride
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh

 

[Verse 2]
A week or two ago
I thought I'd take a hike
And soon Champion Red
Was right before my eyes

My team was not prepared
Misfortune seemed my lot
I got into a battle
And then I got knocked out

 

[Chorus]

Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells
Ho-oh give me strength
Oh what pain it is to ride
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh, hey
Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells
Ho-oh give me strength

Oh what pain it is to ride
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh

 

[Verse 3]
A week or two ago
The story I hate to tell
I went out to Mt Silver
And thought I was in hell
The boy was looking down
With a team of level 80s
He said no words as I whited out
And let free a quiet sigh

 

[Chorus]

Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells
Ho-oh give me strength
Oh what pain it is to ride
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh, hey
Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells
Ho-oh give me strength

Oh what pain it is to ride
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh

 

[Verse 4]
Now the grass is green
And with Ho-oh on my team
I think I can fulfil my dream
And beat Red's evil team
Just gotta get this right
With no friends to help me fight
Beat him with his own cheap tricks
And bam, I'll win the fight

 

[Chorus]

Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells
Ho-oh give me strength
Oh what pain it is to ride
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh, hey
Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells
Ho-oh give me strength

Oh what pain it is to ride
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh

 

 

that's music for my ears hahha

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IGN Akshit

Original Carol: Let It Snow!

 

Mewtwo No!

 

 

Oh the humans think I'm woeful
But they hurt other pokémons & are delightful
And they scream when inside their pokéballs I don't go
Mewtwo No! Mewtwo No! Mewtwo No!

 

It's Christmas and my rage ain't stopping
Must save my Ice brethren even if human heads go popping
Begging for mercy when they feel the cold nice and slow
Mewtwo No! Mewtwo No! Mewtwo No!

Then Mew comes and tells me my justice ain't right
How my hatred drives me & none is saved from the storm!
But who'll stop me and dares to fight
All my history I've always won


Their cruelty finally slowly dying
But, this world, want me say goodbying
And now I control my anger and tell me so
Mewtwo No! Mewtwo No! Mewtwo No!

 

 

 

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A PokeMMO Christmas Carol

The Results

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66f19f226c7df80acbb4027e3a839094.png1st Place - Johnnikles Always Christmas when your typing's Ice

 

Video:

 


Jynx used Sing, Lovely Kiss'ing.
This Sheer Cold... is not "miss"ing.
An Ice Heal, you'll buy, still won't thaw out tonight.
It's winter outside, and our typing's "Ice."

"Go Away," says the Grass type.
Lapras is still using Freeze-Dry.
A Weaville Ice Punch, a happy Snorunt.
The snow is pouring, and our typing's "Ice."

All the Spearow flew south for the Winter,
Ursaring hibernates in a den.
If he wakes up early, he'll say "No, sir."
Toss and turn, and go to sleep again.

Christmas time, we'll go take a break.
We'll give gifts to all of our mates.
Then the Twenty-Sixth, we'll go back to this:
Reigning terror, 'cause our typing's "Ice."

All the Murkrow flew south for a warm stall,
All the Weedles are in diapause.
Delibird is throwing all the snowballs,
you'd better hope that there's a "Freezing" clause.

When it ends, we're okaying.
we can still go back to playing.
We'll set up some Hail, and giggle and yell.
It's always Christmas when your typing's "Ice."

It's always Christmas when your typing's "Ice."

It's always Christmas when your typing's "Ice!"

Judges all agreed that this Johnnikles' lyrics flowed well with the rhythm of the original carol. We all really appreciated how much work and dedication went into this entry. I personally love how many Pokemon are included in this song, really fitting the brief to give an original carol a "Pokemon" makeover. This creative entry is deserving of first place, well done Johnnikles!

 

0a324a3db8f5fc84d6e3bf88306a9800.png2nd Place - xSparkie Stantler the shiny NU

 

 


  You know Deerling, and Sawsbuck, and
  Bouffalant, and Tauros,
  Virizion, and Cobalion, and
  Terrakion and Keldeo
  But do you recall
  The most famous NU of all

 

  Stantler, the shiny NU
  had a very shiny pose
  and if you ever saw it
  you would even say it shows.

 

  All of the other NUs
  used to leer and mimic his name
  They never let poor Stantler
  play in any NU games.

 

  Then one foggy Christmas eve
  Bilburt came to say:
  "Stantler with my OT so great,
  won't you lead my team at eight?"

 

  Then all the NUs loved him
  as they psyched up with glee,           
  Stantler the shiny NU,
  you'll win all the tournies! 

 

xSparkie submitted his entry first, judges felt this was really brave as there were no other entries to compare his own to. We all liked how the lyrics fit the story of the original carol and gave it top marks for originality. It was really close between this entry and the first place one and we all felt this entry was also a winner. Great entry xSparkie, we all enjoyed your entry a lot.

 

1cb4cbc2ddb084854c3ecba965c5417d.png3rd Place - TheGreatMe Ho-Oh's Bells

 

 


[Verse 1]
Dashing through Mt Silver
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh
Dodging the trainers we go
Crying all the way
Bells on Bell tower ring
Making Red shine bright
What fun it is to phone a friend
To help me fight Red right

 

[Chorus]
Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells
Ho-oh give me strength
Oh what pain it is to ride
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh, hey
Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells
Ho-oh give me strength

Oh what pain it is to ride
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh

 

[Verse 2]
A week or two ago
I thought I'd take a hike
And soon Champion Red
Was right before my eyes
My team was not prepared
Misfortune seemed my lot
I got into a battle
And then I got knocked out

 

[Chorus]

Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells
Ho-oh give me strength
Oh what pain it is to ride
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh, hey
Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells
Ho-oh give me strength

Oh what pain it is to ride
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh

 

[Verse 3]
A week or two ago
The story I hate to tell
I went out to Mt Silver
And thought I was in hell
The boy was looking down
With a team of level 80s
He said no words as I whited out
And let free a quiet sigh

 

[Chorus]

Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells
Ho-oh give me strength
Oh what pain it is to ride
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh, hey
Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells
Ho-oh give me strength

Oh what pain it is to ride
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh

 

[Verse 4]
Now the grass is green
And with Ho-oh on my team
I think I can fulfil my dream
And beat Red's evil team
Just gotta get this right
With no friends to help me fight
Beat him with his own cheap tricks
And bam, I'll win the fight

 

[Chorus]

Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells
Ho-oh give me strength
Oh what pain it is to ride
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh, hey
Ho-oh's bells, Ho-oh's bells
Ho-oh give me strength

Oh what pain it is to ride
In a Tauro-os pulled sleigh

 

Judges really enjoyed the connection to older generations of Pokemon games. We felt that Jingle Bells was one of the hardest carols to maintain a consistent flow and we feel that this entry did it justice. Overall a really good effort and an entertaining read!

 

skitty_md2_spriteNoad's Honourable Mention(s)

The honourable mention will receive a small token of my appreciation for their entry.

Suneet

 

 


On the first day of Christmas
my true love sent to me:
A Pidgey in a Pecha Tree

On the second day of Christmas
my true love sent to me:
2 Pidoves
and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree

On the third day of Christmas
my true love sent to me:
3 Blazikens
2 Pidoves
and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree

On the fourth day of Christmas
my true love sent to me:
4 Delibirds

3 Blazikens
2 Pidoves
and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree

On the fifth day of Christmas
my true love sent to me:
5 Goldeeeeeeeeeeeeen
4 Delibirds
3 Blazikens
2 Pidoves
and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree

On the sixth day of Christmas
my true love sent to me:
6 Combees Buzzing
5 Goldeeeeeeeeeeeeen
4 Delibirds
3 Blazikens
2 Pidoves
and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree

On the seventh day of Christmas
my true love sent to me:
7 Swanna Swimming
6 Combees Buzzing
5 Goldeeeeeeeeeeeeen
4 Delibirds
3 Blazikens
2 Pidoves
and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree

On the eighth day of Christmas
my true love sent to me:
8 Miltanks Mooing
7 Swanna Swimming
6 Combees Buzzing
5 Goldeeeeeeeeeeeeen
4 Delibirds
3 Blazikens
2 Pidoves
and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree

On the ninth day of Christmas
my true love sent to me:
9 Froakies Singing
8 Miltanks Mooing
7 Swanna Swimming
6 Combees Buzzing
5 Goldeeeeeeeeeeeeen
4 Delibirds
3 Blazikens
2 Pidoves
and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree

On the tenth day of Christmas
my true love sent to me:
10 Spoinks a Bouncing

9 Froakies Singing
8 Miltanks Mooing
7 Swanna Swimming
6 Combees Buzzing
5 Goldeeeeeeeeeeeeen
4 Delibirds
3 Blazikens
2 Pidoves
and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree

On the eleventh day of Christmas
my true love sent to me:
11 Cloysters Clamping
10 Spoinks a Bouncing
9 Froakies Singing
8 Miltanks Mooing
7 Swanna Swimming
6 Combees Buzzing
5 Goldeeeeeeeeeeeeen
4 Delibirds
3 Blazikens
2 Pidoves
and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree

On the twelfth day of Christmas
my true love sent to me:
12 Gurdurrs Lifting
11 Cloysters Clamping
10 Spoinks a Bouncing
9 Froakies Singing
8 Miltanks Mooing
7 Swanna Swimming
6 Combees Buzzing
5 Goldeeeeeeeeeeeeen
4 Delibirds
3 Blazikens
2 Pidoves
and a Pidgey in a Pecha Tree 

 

Overall I found this a really charming entry and it is paced very well, the Pokemon are well placed. I found this to be one of the most catchiest entries and even though the theme is Pokemon, it leaves you with a festive feeling.

 

@ThatGreatGuy1 @Suneet

@Johnnicles @xSparkie

 

 

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