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Mega Moemon Firered (1.4c), August2023


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5 hours ago, GARCHOMP said:

Amaura.Aurorus

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Amaura's leotard looks like it might be ending too far down. The bottom half of it looks more like a diaper in terms of its shape.(edited)
 
 
 
Amaura's face on the frontsprite needs some work. The eyes say very tilted head but the mouth says her face isn't tilted.
 
 
 
Aurorus's hair needs work on both sprites.
 
 
 
The backsprite ribbons look like they were pasted onto the head at the wrong angles.
 
 
 
(Not that he'll see this feedback. But if anyone else wants to clean these two up some more, then this is what I can notice as problems right now)

This feedback is from Leafjewel

 

Amaura is not recognizable. The ribbon shouldn't be pure yellow and should look more like Amaura's fins.

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