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Although I have a moderate amount of experience in competitive battling, I seem to be losing almost all of my games. The ones I do win seem lucky. Please destroy my team to show it's weaknesses. Don't be discouraged from ripping into my team and my decisions :)

 

Gardevoir - Modest - Life ball - Synchronise

252 SpA / 252 Spe / 4 SpD

Psychic / Destiny Bond / Thunderbolt / Will-o-wisp

31/22/31/31/31/31

 

Alakazam - Modest - Life ball - Inner focus

252 SpA / 252 Spe / 4 Hp

Substitute / Psychic / HP Ice / Calm mind

28/12/24/31/31/31

 

Metagross - Bashful - Life ball - Clear body

128 HP / 128 Atk / 128 SpA / 126 SpD

Thunderpunch / Ice punch / Psychic / Earthquake

31/31/31/28/19/28

 

Skarmory - Impish - Leftovers - Keen eye

252 HP / 252 SpD / 4 Def

Spikes / Rest / Pursuit / Roar

31/31/31/13/31/31

 

Gyarados - Jolly - Life ball - Intimidate 

252 Atk / 252 Spe / 4 HP

Dragon dance / Taunt / Earthquake / Waterfall

31/31/31/14/31/31

 

Cradily - Naughty - Leftovers - Suction cups

252 HP / 252 SpD / 4Atk

Toxic / HP Fire / Barrier / Recover

26/14/29/26/31/30

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15 minutes ago, WilfZaha said:

Although I have a moderate amount of experience in competitive battling, I seem to be losing almost all of my games. The ones I do win seem lucky. Please destroy my team to show it's weaknesses. Don't be discouraged from ripping into my team and my decisions :)

 

Gardevoir - Modest - Life ball - Synchronise

252 SpA / 252 Spe / 4 SpD

Psychic / Destiny Bond / Thunderbolt / Will-o-wisp

31/22/31/31/31/31

 

Alakazam - Modest - Life ball - Inner focus

252 SpA / 252 Spe / 4 Hp

Substitute / Psychic / HP Ice / Calm mind

28/12/24/31/31/31

 

Metagross - Bashful - Life ball - Clear body

128 HP / 128 Atk / 128 SpA / 126 SpD

Thunderpunch / Ice punch / Psychic / Earthquake

31/31/31/28/19/28

 

Skarmory - Impish - Leftovers - Keen eye

252 HP / 252 SpD / 4 Def

Spikes / Rest / Pursuit / Roar

31/31/31/13/31/31

 

Gyarados - Jolly - Life ball - Intimidate 

252 Atk / 252 Spe / 4 HP

Dragon dance / Taunt / Earthquake / Waterfall

31/31/31/14/31/31

 

Cradily - Naughty - Leftovers - Suction cups

252 HP / 252 SpD / 4Atk

Toxic / HP Fire / Barrier / Recover

26/14/29/26/31/30

Skarmory is more a defense wall than a special defense.

 

Maybe something like curse on Cradily? I use it and it seems to work well 

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Gardevoir - Modest - Life ball - Synchronise

252 SpA / 252 Spe / 4 SpD

Psychic / Destiny Bond / Thunderbolt / Will-o-wisp

31/22/31/31/31/31

 

Alakazam - Timid - Life ball - Inner focus

252 SpA / 252 Spe / 4 Hp

Signal Beam / Psychic / HP Ground / Calm mind

28/12/24/31/31/31

 

Metagross - Bashful - Life ball - Clear body

128 HP / 128 Atk / 128 SpA / 126 SpD

Thunderpunch / Ice punch / Psychic / Earthquake

31/31/31/28/19/28

 

Skarmory - Impish - Leftovers - Keen eye

252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SpDef

Spikes / Rest / Whirlwind / Drill Peck

31/31/31/13/31/31

 

Gyarados - Jolly - Life ball - Intimidate 

252 Atk / 252 Spe / 4 HP

Dragon dance / Taunt / Earthquake / Waterfall

31/31/31/14/31/31

 

Cradily - Careful - Leftovers - Suction cups

252 HP / 252 SpD / 4Atk

Toxic or Curse / Rock Slide / Bullet Seed / Recover

26/14/29/26/31/30

 

This would be better for your team and those comps. 

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20 minutes ago, WilfZaha said:

Gardevoir - Modest - Life ball - Synchronise

252 SpA / 252 Spe / 4 SpD

Psychic / Destiny Bond / Thunderbolt / Will-o-wisp

31/22/31/31/31/31

It's easy Houndoom bait which is super common these days. 

 

20 minutes ago, WilfZaha said:

Alakazam - Modest - Life ball - Inner focus

252 SpA / 252 Spe / 4 Hp

Substitute / Psychic / HP Ice / Calm mind

28/12/24/31/31/31

You achieve nothing with sub + hp ice. You need to find a way to hit steel / dark types which is what resist Psychic. Get Signal Beam + HP Fire / Ground. 

 

20 minutes ago, WilfZaha said:

Metagross - Bashful - Life ball - Clear body

128 HP / 128 Atk / 128 SpA / 126 SpD

Thunderpunch / Ice punch / Psychic / Earthquake

31/31/31/28/19/28

So far you have 0 ways to break Forretress. Not going with a + attk nature has an impact on the damage you deal to your opponents and something like Bulky Ludicolo just shuts you down. A lot of players have started to run toxic meta to weaken Milo / Ludicolo. Also Psychic is mainly there to hit Weezing. I don't think you need 128 spak evs + orb to get the kill, so maybe change the ev spread.

 

20 minutes ago, WilfZaha said:

Skarmory - Impish - Leftovers - Keen eye

252 HP / 252 SpD / 4 Def

Spikes / Rest / Pursuit / Roar

31/31/31/13/31/31

I like the idea of pursuit, but once you reveal your whole set you're just begging for Heracross to spam low kick. 

 

20 minutes ago, WilfZaha said:

Gyarados - Jolly - Life ball - Intimidate 

252 Atk / 252 Spe / 4 HP

Dragon dance / Taunt / Earthquake / Waterfall

31/31/31/14/31/31

Personally I prefer something like Bounce / Return / Crunch over EQ because you seem to be having a horrible matchup vs Bulky Ludicolo. Taunt Gyara is really good for those players who rely on Skarm to deal with it. Taunt on the WW and then the other moves such as crunch / bounce / return are resisted by Skarm and that way Counter from Skarm doesn't kill you. So you can take it out with Waterfall the next turn. 

 

20 minutes ago, WilfZaha said:

Cradily - Naughty - Leftovers - Suction cups

252 HP / 252 SpD / 4Atk

Toxic / HP Fire / Barrier / Recover

26/14/29/26/31/30

Using -spdef nature on an spdef wall and with a +attk nature with no physical move seems very counter productive. ^I think Jovi mentioned a good set for Cradily to use and start from there. This current set of yours doesn't accomplish anything either.

 

Good luck. 

Edited by NikhilR
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Sub+Life orb will wear down the user very quickly, either opt for another move that isnt sub or drop life orb. Signal beam is a nice alternative. Skarmory should have sturdy, as keen eye is useless on it. Bashful is a poor nature on anything, and metagross will like a nature to boost its atk or spatk, also HP Fire.

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