NerdieTony Posted September 22, 2016 Share Posted September 22, 2016 Lovely JeanetteOh Jeannette, oh my lovely JeannetteWhy would you want to forget? Oh Jeannette, oh my sad little JeannetteWhy did you want to be dead?Oh me, oh me, oh lonely meWhy did you leave me to beOh me, oh me, oh sad old meWhy did you wish to be set freeOh why, oh why , oh simply whyYou left me alone, to suffer and cryOh why, oh why, oh why did you dieNow I can't forgive you due to your final lieBye-bye, goodbye, I shall join you tonightI need you more than ever so I will follow the lightBye-bye, goodbye, I shall slowly dieI won't ever feel the same without you by my sideDarkness SurroundsThe darkness surroundsUp, down and aroundIt haunts you with an endless soundThe darkness surroundsThe darkness is everywhereIt always provides you with tons of careAnd also a deadly scareThe darkness is everywhereThe darkness is hereWhat's that behind your ear?It feels like a pointy spearThe darkness is hereThe darkness is goneJust when it turns dawnAs your days shall go onThe darkness is goneThe darkness surroundsUp, down and aroundIt haunts you with that endless soundThe darkness surroundsMy DarkMy dark soul haunts me when i'm aloneMy dark tone scares people when i'm on the phoneMy dark clothes hide my weak and fragile bonesMy dark soul haunts me when i'm alone IlusionXD 1 Link to comment
MustangCZ Posted September 22, 2016 Share Posted September 22, 2016 (edited) Wow, you really have a great talent, perhaps the emotion it transmits is not my favorite, but still shows your incredible ability for this, I hope you continue doing this, do not waste this incredible talent you have and try to use it more often. Each poem, especially Lovely Jeanette, takes you to a kind of catharsis, and reflects the loneliness and despair, it leaves much to think about what surrounds you, great job! Edited September 22, 2016 by MustangCZ NerdieTony 1 Link to comment
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