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[Poems] A few points i wrote in the past


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Lovely Jeanette



Oh Jeannette, oh my lovely Jeannette
Why would you want to forget? 
Oh Jeannette, oh my sad little Jeannette
Why did you want to be dead?

Oh me, oh me, oh lonely me
Why did you leave me to be
Oh me, oh me, oh sad old me
Why did you wish to be set free

Oh why, oh why , oh simply why
You left me alone, to suffer and cry
Oh why, oh why, oh why did you die
Now I can't forgive you due to your final lie

Bye-bye, goodbye, I shall join you tonight
I need you more than ever so I will follow the light
Bye-bye, goodbye, I shall slowly die
I won't ever feel the same without you by my side

Darkness Surrounds


The darkness surrounds
Up, down and around
It haunts you with an endless sound
The darkness surrounds

The darkness is everywhere
It always provides you with tons of care
And also a deadly scare
The darkness is everywhere

The darkness is here
What's that behind your ear?
It feels like a pointy spear
The darkness is here

The darkness is gone
Just when it turns dawn
As your days shall go on
The darkness is gone

The darkness surrounds
Up, down and around
It haunts you with that endless sound
The darkness surrounds

My Dark


My dark soul haunts me when i'm alone
My dark tone scares people when i'm on the phone
My dark clothes hide my weak and fragile bones
My dark soul haunts me when i'm alone

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Wow, you really have a great talent, perhaps the emotion it transmits is not my favorite, but still shows your incredible ability for this, I hope you continue doing this, do not waste this incredible talent you have and try to use it more often. Each poem, especially Lovely Jeanette, takes you to a kind of catharsis, and reflects the loneliness and despair, it leaves much to think about what surrounds you, great job!

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