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A Lyrical Word Battle: Results!


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Whilst the sheer number of entries might've been slightly lacking, the quality of them certainly wasn't.

You'd think it'd be easy to rank four entries from best to worst, but it was a little bit tough, with differing opinions from different judges.

Nevertheless, here's the lineup that we've been able to agree on:

 

1st Place: FireTail

Spoiler

 

Style: Pop Ballad (i can provide some vocals as i imagined them if needed) 

 

The Chansey Dance

 

VERSE 1

Do you fear me? 
I will make you fall
They can't touch me
I'm a sassy wall

 

Try to toxic
And a bell will ring
If you hit me
Listen to my wish

 

VERSE 2

Do you love me? 
Bet you love my kit
Every teamcomp
Has some room for me

 

Farming BPs
In the matchmaking
Winning tourneys
I make noobs ragequit

 

CHORUS:
Whether you're specs or physical
We'll win this game 6 to 0
There's just no end to these stalls
In the tier of the broken walls

 

VERSE 3

50 HP? 

Better hide from me
Tell your teammates
'Bout my killing spree

 

Switching out and
I just heal back up
Trap arena?
Got my new shed hull!

 

CHORUS:
Whether you're specs or physical
We'll win this game 6 to 0
There's just no end to these stalls
In the tier of the broken walls

 

These lyrics are relateable to anyone who has ever played a competitive battle in PokeMMO.

The format and presentation are clean, and just reading these with the 'pop ballad' idea in mind make it very easy for me to picture what it would sound like.

The idea of a female vocal lead over a cutesy instrumentation make an amusing contrast with the amount of sass and confidence that chansey displays here:

"50 HP? ; Better hide from me ; Tell your teammates ; 'Bout my killing spree"

 

2nd Place: OrangeManiac

Spoiler

 

God-bird Xatu

 

Verse 1

 

Trainers thought I am worthless

They made me NU

But all you scrubs don't know

That I'm coming for you

 

Because all I got to do

Is let my mind Calm

I will sweep your whole team

And you will face palm

 

Just try to attack

I can eat it all up

Return from Choice Band Slaking

And I ask "wassup?"

 

Okay, I took a bit of damage

Now let me take a nap

But before you realize

I wake up and attack

 

*chorus*

 

You know that..

 

I can see the future

I can see the past

But what I know for sure

Is that you just can't last

 

Unless you pick me in your team

Now let's get the win

And let the tier know

That I am the king

 

You know that..

 

I can see the future

I can see the past

But what I know for sure

Is that you just can't last

 

Unless you pick me in your team

Now let's get the win

And make every trainer here

Be mirin' (my power)

 

 

Verse 2

 

 

You still ain't convinced?

Well, I can make that change

You lost without me once again

Now ain't that strange?

 

 

Just put the team on my back

Well, rather on my wings

We glide to the victory

And we shall be the kings

 

 

I heard you don't like Umbreon

And you hate that fat blob

Well, I'm just letting you know

That I'm here for the job

 

 

Now if you still ain't convinced

It's all your fault

Just leave me in the PC Box

And lose by default

 

 

*chorus*

 

You know that..

 

I can see the future

I can see the past

But what I know for sure

Is that you just can't last

 

Unless you pick me in your team

Now let's get the win

And let the tier know

That I am the king

 

You know that..

 

I can see the future

I can see the past

But what I know for sure

Is that you just can't last

 

Unless you pick me in your team

Now let's get the win

And make every trainer here

Be mirin' (my power)

 

*epic hip hop beat until the end*

I mean. It's pretty good.

 

Congratulations to our top winners!

Many thanks to both of you, as well as Heimann and DoubleJ for participating.

ETA for the song is a few weeks...?

 

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