YagamiNoir Posted February 14, 2015 Share Posted February 14, 2015 A story in a poem, just because. Written on occasion to a birthday of a certain friend of mine. Plus I needed to write and figured I'd revive this place for a bit. The Promise of the Winds She saw them there Under the evening sunshine The rain of dandelions The pleasant scent of irises Alone, the two of them, it was all perfect align The gusts of the spring enveloped them; And his eyes oathed to her: "I shall return, no more wars." His hands vowed to her: "My heart and soul, forever yours." His heart promised her: "Your sadness but a story read," His lips reassrured her: "For when I return, your sorrow will be shed." And a ring he slipped on her finger: "We meet here again, and we shall be wed." 'Twas long since their oath, till it came on that day With the petals of the flora at the winds, asway Veiled and in white she was, tranquil, in wait For their reunion, and the love they should share, in spate. The sky's orange draped itself black Yet to come he was, inside, her heart began to crack A tear she shed, and a whisper she heard She wondered, and was she haunted or reassured She felt him, she heard him -- but yet, why was he not there? What should she have felt at the sound -- to be happy, or to despair? Her emotions, her tears -- Sorrow or joy? An illusion amidst her confusion Or the winds at her feelings, the truth nothing but coy? "Wait for me, forever." [spoiler] I know my poetry sucks, bear with it. [/spoiler] ThinkNice, Magnet, Grampaaa and 7 others 10 Link to comment
Gunthug Posted February 14, 2015 Share Posted February 14, 2015 "The sky's orange draped itself black" Really loved this line ^ Link to comment
YagamiNoir Posted February 14, 2015 Author Share Posted February 14, 2015 Feedback is appreciated, thanks you two. Link to comment
jayfeatskydd Posted February 14, 2015 Share Posted February 14, 2015 (edited) and then he plows her. Good read, nice Yagami. Edited February 14, 2015 by jayfeatskydd Gunthug 1 Link to comment
Inarin Posted February 14, 2015 Share Posted February 14, 2015 Very nice. I'm not one for poetry, but this is really something special. Link to comment
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