kakaloto Posted December 26, 2014 Share Posted December 26, 2014 (edited) https://www.scribd.com/doc/251031989/Bonfire Started writing this story for the legendary contest and got 3 pages in before I found out that the word limit was 2k- (totally my own fault for not even checking the rules). Had so much fun that I decided to finish it anyway XD It takes place in 15th century Kanto. I hope you enjoy Bonfire. :) Edited January 4, 2015 by kakaloto SirYurop 1 Link to comment
Bestfriendss Posted December 26, 2014 Share Posted December 26, 2014 Started writing this story for the legendary contest and got 3 pages in before I found out that the word limit was 2k- (totally my own fault for not even checking the rules). Had so much fun that I decided to finish it anyway XD It takes place in 15th century Kanto. The first quarter of the story is in "third draft" basically done but in need of some polishing (checking for typos etc.) The second quarter of the story is in "second draft" so I'll have to go along and do punctuation/spacing in addition to checking for *copious amounts* of typos grammar screwups. The remaining half is straight up rough draft, but the story itself is complete. All that being said I hope you enjoy Bonfire. :) https://www.scribd.com/doc/251031989/Bonifre (just noticed that scribd did some really wacky things with the spacing- apologies in advance for all the extra scrolling :S ) Nice story, although, do want to ask why you are doing this story... Legendary story? Link to comment
TheGloriousWalrus Posted December 26, 2014 Share Posted December 26, 2014 Nice story, although, do want to ask why you are doing this story... Legendary story? https://forums.pokemmo.eu/index.php?/topic/49061-contest-a-legendary-contest/ Link to comment
Bestfriendss Posted December 26, 2014 Share Posted December 26, 2014 https://forums.pokemmo.eu/index.php?/topic/49061-contest-a-legendary-contest/ Thanks for telling me this, by the way, that picture of you, is that you irl with a walrus mask on? kakaloto 1 Link to comment
TheGloriousWalrus Posted December 26, 2014 Share Posted December 26, 2014 Thanks for telling me this, by the way, that picture of you, is that you irl with a walrus mask on? Haha, no google images is where I found that picture. Link to comment
Bestfriendss Posted December 26, 2014 Share Posted December 26, 2014 Haha, no google images is where I found that picture. Nice, it looks so real life, I would also like to pose this question if you don't mind, are you participating in the Story Event as well? Link to comment
TheGloriousWalrus Posted December 26, 2014 Share Posted December 26, 2014 Nice, it looks so real life, I would also like to pose this question if you don't mind, are you participating in the Story Event as well? No, although I have donated a shiny noctowl to the prizepool. Anyway OP, it's really intresting to imagine the pokemon world in the past. I like the placenames too dedegendut 1 Link to comment
kakaloto Posted December 26, 2014 Author Share Posted December 26, 2014 Thanks so much guys. Been trying to keep my attachment to it as light as possible so I wont be crushed if someone notices something ... well.. storycrushing. Get's harder to be neutral the more I go back and do edits though. And yeah Bestfriends, it was going to be for the legendary writing contest, but it's way too long. Ended up just writing it for fun. :) Link to comment
Grampaaa Posted January 18, 2015 Share Posted January 18, 2015 I always thought it was "B-But!" not "B but-" Meh, good story though and I love how I could imagine everything, I don't enjoy how far in time it is but I still love it. Please make more stories. I mean, you've inspired me to make some. Just started one. xD Thanks for the story! :D Link to comment
kakaloto Posted January 20, 2015 Author Share Posted January 20, 2015 (edited) Thanks for reading Grampaa :D Super glad you enjoyed it and that it's inspired you to write. (Also, Watt's stammering has been fixed, ty for the input.) Edited January 20, 2015 by kakaloto Link to comment
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