Emlee Posted June 29, 2015 Share Posted June 29, 2015 I think he ended up changing the text and it looks better imo~ Link to comment
Deejaye Posted June 29, 2015 Author Share Posted June 29, 2015 yeah he changed the font, i was just too lazy to go back and find it and compare Link to comment
Heimann Posted June 30, 2015 Share Posted June 30, 2015 the critique no one but heiman has been looking for Regarding text: text font could be better but I see you changed it in your signature, and that one is better so no complaints with the that font. I would have maybe made the font color the color of his pocket's hankerchief but idk how that would look plus that's me being extremely nit picky. Smudge: The flow of it is very good overall. My eye travels along it well. (: But, I have like, 2 complaints? The smudge on the right side that's his skin tone that fans out is distracting. My eyes kinda keep jumping between that big blotch and the render like "what should i pay attention to more ):" 2nd complaint is something that idk if you can fix? The seperation between smudge colors are very jaggy which I'm assuming is because you're using a mouse so that's not something you can fix I'm guessing? unless i guess you are super precise? zzz I don't know overall a+ jelly of heiman's ability to smudge, going to SMUDGE HIS FACE OFF to make myself feel better Just saw this o; When I originally re-did the font & what not I tried the red on his suit and it looks pretty derpy. idk if it shows on my current one, but I used that red to slightly outerglow the text. I know its bad on the right, but I keep fucking with it and can't seem to make it look better. Idk if I can fix the smudge thing either due to one of these reasons: I don't know how (first try smooging) I have CS4? I have a disease that makes my hands shake terribly at times, so I can never really do fluent nice flowing curves.ill smudge u off dese forums m8 Deejaye 1 Link to comment
TheGloriousWalrus Posted June 30, 2015 Share Posted June 30, 2015 ill smudge u off dese forums m8 Heimann, FlareBlitzz, dedegendut and 1 other 4 Link to comment
Kelarr Posted June 30, 2015 Share Posted June 30, 2015 (edited) Lol jk pls make me thing Edited July 2, 2015 by Kelarr Heimann and Deejaye 2 Link to comment
Heimann Posted July 3, 2015 Share Posted July 3, 2015 Winters new profile pic [media]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tRlaRuGPWI4[/media] Link to comment
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