toottoot Posted September 12, 2016 Share Posted September 12, 2016 @laGashetaHardcore Thank you for the edits :) The pink unfortunately can't be used in the mouth, though...shiny Girafarig has blue in place of pink so the mouth would turn blue on the shiny. Link to comment
Arisa Posted September 12, 2016 Share Posted September 12, 2016 @toottoot Her outfit kind of reminds me of Momo Kisaragi, so here. Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 (edited) editing @toottoot epic fail XD blue mouth @RacheLucario edit backsprite <3 edit 2 Edited September 13, 2016 by laGashetaHardcore razielhd, Rache and notmudkip0 3 Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 13, 2016 Author Share Posted September 13, 2016 CrookedWings427, toottoot and razielhd 3 Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 (edited) @Moetal Made some edits The shading on her right (our left) twin tail is tricky. Because, though the light source is coming from the right, the twin tail should be flowing behind her. I took out the highlights and added darker shading, so i hope it makes sense now. I made her face shorter and went more with the moe face magi taught me about (her hair should appear to be blocking part of the left side of her face (our right)). She was missing the left strand of hair, so i added that to make it semetrical. Lightened the darkest shade of blue so it could be utilized for more than just a second color for outlining. Also removed one pixel of blush on each side cause to me it looked like her blush was overlapping her eyes. Plus other small shading and anatomy edits. Before After Im really happy with her right now but im sure ill find more mistakes x.x Its strange working on my first sprite again xD Edit: do her boobs look too big to anyone else? x.x The first poliwrath xDDD @Kickern @toottoot I made a poliwhirl without goggles but my app force closed before i could save >.< ill redo it. Edited September 13, 2016 by CrookedWings427 razielhd 1 Link to comment
ZiggyZag Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 (edited) faq Edited March 12, 2017 by ZiggyZag laGashetaHardcore and razielhd 2 Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 (edited) Made some edits to Girafarig to make shiny not have a blue mouth: Tried adding blush with the new color, but she might look better without it. I may have to play with the shiny palette more later. Edited September 13, 2016 by Kickern Link to comment
burningscarlet Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 1 hour ago, Kickern said: Made some edits to Girafarig to make shiny not have a blue mouth: Tried adding blush with the new color, but she might look better without it. I may have to play with the shiny palette more later. I think it kinda looks odd because of the way both her legs are facing towards the middle kinda like they're forced. If the feet were more obvious and pointing towards the center it might look more natural but it might look better if the right leg was facing a different direction @toottoot I personally love all your designs though, so please don't take too harshly :) Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 (edited) On another note, im buying another poke plush! What should i get? I currently have: Vaporeon Lapras Magikarp Mew Riolu Mudkip Piplup Pikachu And both versions of Shellos Got umbreon Edited September 13, 2016 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
toottoot Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 (edited) I made some fixes to Girafarig and paint.net crashed without saving :'( @Kickern Thank you for saving the palette omg I was ready to give up @burningscarlet No offense taken! I agree the legs are super weird ^^;;; Edited September 13, 2016 by toottoot Link to comment
animeloverxX93 Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 Well, I agree that Poliwhirl's bust is a little too big now, even for an evolved Pokemon. On another note, we now have a nice Totodile. Wished the three legendary birds would take the cake though. Speaking of which, doesn't articuno look kinda irritating with the red in it? I get that we wanted to make the designs kinda similar to mahou shoujo girls from anime and stuff, but wouldn't Japanese mythology work out, too? For articuno, we could base the design on Yuki-onna, for example. The red on the mahou shoujo dress looks kinda irritating on articuno, in my opinion. I know that a lot of people said that there was otherwise too much blue in the sprite, but wouldn't another aproach on its design do the trick? I'd imagine a Yuki-onna giving off an elegant vibe - perfect for a legendary Pokemon such as articuno. Maybe, finding a balance between white and several shades of blue based on a Yuki-onna design would make the sprite look less blue-ish. Feel free to disagree, just my two cents. :3 Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 (edited) Made the bust smaller and other minor edits Edited September 13, 2016 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 @CrookedWings427 the big chest look better Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 (edited) I'm ok with science: I don't think the chest is too big, but what do I know? @animeloverxX93 Either of these look better? Edited September 13, 2016 by Kickern CrookedWings427 1 Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 (edited) @Kickern I really like the turquoise articuno Better or worse? Before After Edited September 13, 2016 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
BlooKirby Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 @Kickern animelover has a point about the red in Articuno. I vote for the blue edit! Link to comment
SOAForever Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 I know this may sound a little left field, but does anyone have a modified GBA format rom of Fire Red (or any other gen 3 rom) that allows all Pokemon to get caught without outside help, one that would be compatible with the latest patch? I would like to take advantage of the game fully, instead of being limited in what can be caught. I know Fire Red Omega was able to work this way in the past, but no longer will cooperate with the more recent patches. It's a bit disheartening to see some of the changes, knowing I won't be able to catch then, especially only using a GBA emulator on my phone like I do. Link to comment
notmudkip0 Posted September 13, 2016 Share Posted September 13, 2016 Just now, SOAForever said: I know this may sound a little left field, but does anyone have a modified GBA format rom of Fire Red (or any other gen 3 rom) that allows all Pokemon to get caught without outside help, one that would be compatible with the latest patch? I would like to take advantage of the game fully, instead of being limited in what can be caught. I know Fire Red Omega was able to work this way in the past, but no longer will cooperate with the more recent patches. It's a bit disheartening to see some of the changes, knowing I won't be able to catch then, especially only using a GBA emulator on my phone like I do. You'll have to look elsewhere for a ROM like that, it's against the rules to distribute them here. Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 14, 2016 Share Posted September 14, 2016 (edited) about paras?? anything or she is finished?? @Kickern@CrookedWings427 the face of Poliwhrat looks "crushed" Edited September 14, 2016 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
Arisa Posted September 14, 2016 Share Posted September 14, 2016 (edited) @laGashetaHardcore I tried widening the shoulders, and changing the face and hair shading. Just realized I forgot to give her eyebrows... You saved as .jpg, here is the original as .png if you don't like my edits. Edited September 14, 2016 by Arisa laGashetaHardcore 1 Link to comment
Nerak55 Posted September 14, 2016 Share Posted September 14, 2016 (edited) LATER EDIT: Edited September 14, 2016 by Nerak55 Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 14, 2016 Share Posted September 14, 2016 (edited) @laGashetaHardcore The hair looks better but i think the face looks worse. Probably because of the angle the jawline is going down at. Edit Thoughts? Edited September 14, 2016 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 14, 2016 Share Posted September 14, 2016 (edited) @CrookedWings427 the quality of Poliwhirl down in your edit the hair looks more sample, the face could be more moe, the arms are not the same size, the size of my edit is better, she looks "crushed" Spoiler I know of you can do a better job <3 Edited September 14, 2016 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 14, 2016 Share Posted September 14, 2016 @laGashetaHardcore The hair is taken almost directly from your edit... While my edits arm could probably use lengthening and a bend, yours looks too long to me. The face looks pretty moe in my opinion, its by far not a complete sprite yet and will get more edits but for now I like her body. Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 15, 2016 Share Posted September 15, 2016 @CrookedWings427 I was referring to hair front XD the body does not look bad, but this ill-proportioned, the face looks fat, the body is too small and boots are of very low quality,the legs looks misshapen and the colour palette is better in my edit (my opinion) Link to comment
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