[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)

[laGashetaHardcore]

@McMagister

I use the rom of I use for all patch, this had never happened :/

when go to Wiglytuff in the pokedex the rom crashed D:

[CrookedWings427]

Made some changes to the palette, made the legs longer. Was considering the height edit but i think the ears should be long, and other small edits. 

Used the extra color for blush. 

[Moetal]

File/link are fixed. Let me know if the problem persists.

 

EDIT:

@McMagister

Sentret is a mistake (pun intended). Pineco still look rough to me.

Edited September 11, 2016 by Moetal

[laGashetaHardcore]

Masquerain WIP ...I'm so lazy for finish her

[Majena]

9 hours ago, toottoot said:

Sorry I haven't been doing anything lately. I have to run Windows on my Mac to use paint.net, but all of my schoolwork is on my Mac partition, and work comes first :'(

 

@CrookedWings427

I personally disagree with Majena on most points.

-While some sprites benefit from sharper contrast in colors, I really like the light shading on your Horsea line.

-Some anti-aliasing would be nice on the straight dark blue part, but the fan is supposed to be pretty flat, so it would make sense for it to look 2D. 

-I think Kingdra's face shape is pretty moe as it is. There's something about her right (our left) eyebrow that's bothering me, though (it looks a bit...sharp? ouo)

 

The gripes I have are just that Kingdra's backsprite's mouth/nose seem a little low, and Seadra's backsprite's head looks a bit too narrow. Also, something about the spike in the middle of Seadra's bangs looks a bit off to me, but I can't quite figure out what.

 

That being said, you deserve a break after all that hard work! Thanks for being so on top of things :)

Sure, I can see the softer shading being nice.  I find the shading on the horsea to be nice.  But I think something is off about the shading on seadra's frontsprite hair.  It lacks depth.  Perhaps shifting the colors around rather than re-coloring would fix that.

 

The fan is not really 2D.  If you look at kingdra's backsprite you can see the base of the fan.  I imagine the idea is something like temari's fan, so it's probably at least as thick as an arm.  And most arms require shading.  That being said the end part of the fan in frontsprite/backsprite don't match, but that's probably intentional.

 

Hmm... I still think the lower half of kingdra's face can be more moe.  The top half is good though.  But perhaps this is just an opinion thing.

[laGashetaHardcore]

twink tails or short hair?

Edited September 11, 2016 by laGashetaHardcore

[toottoot]

Was Pineco added? If not, there are some shading fixes I want to make to the front sprite's hair.

Edit: just saw Moetal's post

 

@Majena

I'm really sorry if I came across as abrasive in my post, that was never my intention! I personally think the shading on Seadra's hair mostly needs work by way of placement rather than the colors themselves. As for the fan, since the dark part is (I'm assuming) square-ish, and the flat side is facing the viewer, I don't think it would require as much shading as arms, which are a lot rounder. Kingdra's face my come down to opinion, I personally like the face shape where it is right now.

 

@laGashetaHardcore

Twintails for life.

 

Edited September 12, 2016 by toottoot

[laGashetaHardcore]

little edit

[Moetal]

@laGashetaHardcore

Her left sleeve opening (our right) looks small as oppose to her other sleeve. Her pose is also a bit weird and unnatural, like her body is leaning backward while her legs are forward, like \__ shape, while her arm gives support at the side rather than at the back.

[CrookedWings427]

@toottoot @Majena

Ill make two to accommodate both sets of edit suggestions ;)

In the end we can vote or science

[Rache]

Assuming it's fine due to lack of feedback, so the shiny palette for Totodile is done. Left the red untouched, changing it would have some side effects.

[Munya]

To disappointed about this betrayal of birds to give feedback

17 hours ago, Kurodashi said:

I convinced Rache that Totodile > Birds  =)

[DoubleJ]

Needs more MoeJJ

[toottoot]

Hair and face updates to Pineco, for whatever reason I can't upload the image :(

http://i63.tinypic.com/99gady.jpg

 

I'm also currently drafting backsprites for Blissey and Pinsir, and a front sprite of Girafarig that's been giving me way too much trouble.

[Rache]

Fixed palette, noticed a few pixels forgotten when swapping a colour for a slightly different shade. Backsprite doesn't have these issues.

Edited September 12, 2016 by RacheLucario
Fixed something else

[CrookedWings427]

@laGashetaHardcore

Made some edits at work :)

You had an unused pink so i applied some blush plus other edits 

Edited September 12, 2016 by CrookedWings427

[toottoot]

I still can't upload images :'(

@laGashetaHardcore @CrookedWings427

Shifted Masquerain a bit so she looks like like she's leaning back, the rest are preference edits so feel free to ignore :)

http://i68.tinypic.com/s64wuv.png

[Moetal]

@RacheLucario

The arms and legs are a bit thin. You might need to enlarge the hands/feets. Not sure if it is just the thin arms/legs throwing me off, but I think the body might need to be one pixel wider. Currently the head/face is slightly off centered to the right.

Edited September 12, 2016 by Moetal

[Rache]

@Moetal Better?

[CrookedWings427]

@toottoot

For some reason the link takes me to the site but the image wont load. 

I was having a problem posting images with the insert other media feature. 

Try copying and pasting the actual image (not the link) into the actual response. (Dont use insert other media) 

It works for me :)

[toottoot]

Tried copy/pasting! Thanks @CrookedWings427 :D

Pineco:

Masquerain:

[CrookedWings427]

Thoughts? 

Edited September 12, 2016 by CrookedWings427

[Kickern]

@CrookedWings427

I was just thinking about how weird it is for a girl to have her hair up when it looks like she's about to go swimming.  I think it's the goggles.  They do nothing.

[toottoot]

Girafarig draft

Her palette makes me cry :'(

Not too happy with the way this one turned out, so even though I really want to keep the front pigtails I may swap them out for something that looks less crowded. I don't really like the headphone things and the white patch in the hair, but I wasn't sure how else to incorporate the white in Girafarig's design into the sprite. 

 

(Please send help)

 

Edit: More cleaning/slight edits on Pineco

Should we sync Forretress with Pineco a little more? 

 

@CrookedWings427

Ooh I love the new pose! I agree with Kickern on the goggles though, I don't think they're necessary and they make the top of her head look a little small

Edited September 12, 2016 by toottoot

[laGashetaHardcore]

@toottoot