[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)

[Moetal]

@ZiggyZag

That's a very interesting idea for Magneton. Maybe make her pauldron look like a Magnemite? She needs more armor, and the red skirt is very out of place at the moment.

 

EDIT:

Speaking of Mankey/Primeape

What is this suppose to be? The angry vein mark? Looks like a cross or a swastika to me.

Edited September 1, 2016 by Moetal

[burningscarlet]

@Neckbear Yeah, exactly, that's why I'd thought it'd be a better alternative.

 

@CrookedWings427 If the shape of the giant fan is changed a little bit to look more like the Kingdra fin that could work too if you wanted to keep the giant fan. :3

[CrookedWings427]

Cant tell if this is more distracting

I am color restricted 

[Kickern]

@CrookedWings427

I think it is less distracting.  Part of the reason why the fan was so distracting was because it was bright yellow which made it stand out more compared to the rest of the sprite.

 

@ZiggyZag

I think a knight makes less sense than the schoolgirl theme (which, admittedly, doesn't make that much sense either for Magnemite/Magneton.)  It's kind of a neat looking sprite, though.

Edited September 1, 2016 by Kickern

[CrookedWings427]

Trying to make the face more moe.. 

[Unown]

And now I leave my debut with Moe Articuno! What do you think?

 

Edited September 1, 2016 by Unown
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[CrookedWings427]

@Unown

Could you repost your sprite at 128x128 with a none white background 

 

 

Made some edits, also made a silver version to see which everyone likes

[burningscarlet]

26 minutes ago, CrookedWings427 said:

@Unown

Could you repost your sprite at 128x128 with a none white background 

 

 

Made some edits, also made a silver version to see which everyone likes

@CrookedWings427 The silver one looks better. It fits the color motif of Kingdra better and it doesn't stand out as much.

Edited September 1, 2016 by burningscarlet

[MeDOKTOR]

@CrookedWings427 While the Silver one looks nice and whatnot, i believe that the yellow one fits/looks more like Kingdra-ish,or atleast in my eyes

[Kickern]

@CrookedWings427

Kingdra has a yellow underbelly.  If you want to use silver, I'd say just use it for the shoes and/or the ends of the gloves.  The middle area with her chest and stomach, as well as the bottom of the dress, should stay yellow.  Also, I just noticed her right arm (our left) doesn't look properly proportioned.  From the elbow to the hand looks longer than the upper arm.  I think part of the problem is her hand also looks longer than it should.

 

@Unown

This is what has been worked on for Articuno:

If you want to keep going with yours, try to make her proportions similar to this one.  Or you can try your hand at editing this one.

Edited September 2, 2016 by Kickern

[toottoot]

Apologies for disappearing for so long + here is a Pinsir. (Edit: increased her arm/leg/waist sizes since I made her too skinny)

Clothes/hands could use a bit of polishing, and the eyebrows/horns gave me quite a lot of trouble.

 

Also, I vote gold Kingdra. The contrast is a lot nicer :3

 

@Arisa 

Just noticed our Articuno doesn't have eyebrows

Edited September 2, 2016 by toottoot

[Unown]

I don't expect much positive feedback but as long as I can get a few ideas running...

[CrookedWings427]

@Kickern

 

@toottoot

I forgot to put the eyebrows in, ill probably change the hair anyway. 

[burningscarlet]

@CrookedWings427 Could we change the dress to something with blue feathers for articuno? Seems to match the theme better. Something like this:

 

Spoiler

 

[McMagister]

 

 

Surskit and Poochyama when?

 

@toottoot

You did this without base?  It's really precious and adorable, and easily recognizable as well.

 

@Unown

It has great potential, however your outlines are really haphazardly shaded.

Edited September 2, 2016 by McMagister

[Moetal]

10 hours ago, McMagister said:

Surskit and Poochyama when?

When they don't have midget arms. 

 

Jigglypuff's backsprite hair looks a bit too far out to me.

 

Are we forgetting Iggybuff?

 

Azurmarill's backsprite's arm looks a bit thin. I was also under the impression that her "ears" were part of the hairband rather than an actual part of her.

 

@toottoot

While that Pinsir looks nice, she is a bit tiny/short when compared to her rival counterpart Scyther.

We can either shrink Scyther, or enlarge Pinsir.

Edited September 3, 2016 by Moetal

[laGashetaHardcore]

@toottoot

??

@Moetal

(?

edit +moe?

Edited September 3, 2016 by laGashetaHardcore

[CrookedWings427]

I think we should keep toottoots pinsir and make it bigger rather than completely changing his sprite. 

His is cuter to me and most of the edits seem to be personal preference. 

 

The personal preference edits are actually starting to get to me. Its preventing me from posting things x.x

Also that ivysaur is bowlegged, the palette is the old one which didnt match the pokemon, and the quality is overall low compared to wartortle. 

I still prefer this one 

Or, at least, a science between the two. 

 

Made some edits

Edited September 3, 2016 by CrookedWings427

[laGashetaHardcore]

@CrookedWings427 ironic..

your ivysaur is more low quality and the face is not very moe ¬¬ try to finish her, for now they preffer "my" ivysaur edit 

[McMagister]

@Moetal

Come on, you really don't need me to do something as simple as lengthening the arms, do you now? :P

[CrookedWings427]

Made some major alterations to science the two

Before                             After

 

@laGashetaHardcore

Theres no need to get offended

It just needs to be finished, as does mine. 

Edited September 3, 2016 by CrookedWings427

[McMagister]

10 hours ago, CrookedWings427 said:

The personal preference edits are actually starting to get to me. Its preventing me from posting things x.x

*cough*Absol*cough*Onix*cough*

 

 

Aozane's Beautifly edited to be in seiza pose.  Looks better than our current IMO, because, well, Beautifly should be beautiful.

 

Smeargle that you guys edited from Mincinno, fixed beret and edited face.

 

Igglybuff edited to match Jigglypuff's eyes and general face improvements

Edited September 3, 2016 by McMagister

[Moetal]

@McMagister

Smeargle's front face seems a bit flat, but I'm not exactly sure if it is the lack of outline on the face, the monotone mouth with no "shading", or the head being black in overall. Maybe brown/green eyes would make the face less flat?

[McMagister]

@Moetal

How about this?

 

 

Current progress on Golduck backsprite.  Curse you umbrellas!

Edited September 3, 2016 by McMagister

[Arisa]

In my opinion, Poochyena's hips look way too wide compared to her waist, and her tail isn't fluffy enough.