[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)

[Moetal]

@Majena

Much better, but I feel you could make her fit in the entire frame. There's just so much space you're not utilizing. Design wise, she looks more like a Magnemite than a Magneton.

 

@McMagister

Both Kabutops and Starmie looks great, but as a personal preference I'd say a spiker hair (in either yellow or purple) would fits Starmie more than twintails.

The only thing I see off with Starmie is the dress's right spikes looking like they're decoration in front of the dress rather than part of it. The dress spikes shouldn't cover her waist that much. I can't explain it well, but see if below shows you what I mean.

 

For Kabutops, since it is a WIP I can't tell for sure, but I feel her right hand (our right) is flipped - the thumb looks like it is on the wrong side.

 

@Tackle

By current, do you mean this?

Edited August 20, 2016 by Moetal

[Tackle]

ye..forgive me...X<

 

well i guess i just try design many moemons as much as i want..its fun to do...XD

Edited August 20, 2016 by Tackle

[Moetal]

@Tackle

No worries, your feedbacks are welcomed. I just want to know, what exactly is making you dislike that Scyther sprite? Is it because of the revealing bra-top?

[McMagister]

@Moetal

Noted the Starmie dress problem, I directly updated the sprite.  I think the dress and her pose are enough to signify Starmie to me.

The right thumb is on the right side, I made sure of that.  Although, I admit the right arm is nagging me.

 

@Tackle

These edits are actually pretty promising, that Pinsir is pretty cute.

[CrookedWings427]

Played around with horseas design

[Neckbear]

1 hour ago, McMagister said:

Although, I admit the right arm is nagging me.

Probably because arms don't bend that way. That makes it look unnatural.

Try striking that pose yourself in front of a mirror to determine the placement of the arm?

 

@CrookedWings427

Very cute, but it seems top heavy with that head. I think it might just be a bit too wide.

 

Just my two pesos, since I have nothing else to contribute and stalk this thread more often than I should.

Edited August 20, 2016 by Neckbear

[CrookedWings427]

@Neckbear

Better? 

[laGashetaHardcore]

@McMagister

but ;-; the current Starmie..

[Majena]

@Moetal

Perhaps these are more magneton like?

 

 

Do you think the base sprite is fine or should I try another base sprite?

 

Edit: Tried to make her a little bigger

 

Edit2: More bigger.  I should try to put the arms back in =/

Edited August 20, 2016 by Majena

[laGashetaHardcore]

@CrookedWings427

[CrookedWings427]

@Neckbear

Im really sorry youre tagged here, it wont let me delete the tag x.x

 

Found this sprite and decided to recolor it

Edited August 20, 2016 by CrookedWings427

[McMagister]

@Neckbear

The way I see it, there are at least four ways to fix the problem.  There are more ways, but these I have studied:

From left to right:

The first pose is the simplest way and simply gets rid of the unnatural right arm.  However, it now looks like she's being handcuffed, so I call it the "The BDSM".  However, not all is lost as her right arm is reuseable.

 

The second pose "The Twist" twists the torso to match the position of the arms, which makes it look like she's winding up for an attack with the scythe, however the spine might be unnatural.

 

The last two poses are variations on a theme.  "The Underarm" swaps the position of the arms.  "The Overarm" is the same but holds the scythe with her left hand in an overarm position.

 

 

[Majena]

 

There was an attempt.

[Neckbear]

@McMagister

That looks much better, I'm glad my input helped maybe?

 

I personally like "The Twist" and "The Underarm."

Though the arm is still just a tad unnatural in "The Twist", because it's lacking an elbow. I'm at work or I would indicate how I'd fix it personally. I'll try and do it on a phone app and upload/edit it in a bit.

 

Also noticed the left?(our right) leg doesn't match up with the way that the waist and spine have been twisted.

Edited August 21, 2016 by Neckbear

[razielhd]

@McMagister

 

hey pal.. Well just needed to post something to help you decide jeje.

I'll problably go with the "The BDSM" , and the "The Underarm" positions.. They both look great and natural.. Ty all for the hard work!!.

[Majena]

More experimentation

 

like/dislike? preferences?

 

Edited August 21, 2016 by Majena

[Moetal]

@Majena

Let's not take a base we're already using in the patch. Maybe try salvaging stuff from below - doesn't have to be for Magneton/Magnemite.

http://www.geocities.jp/zassoh2/dot12.htm

 

@McMagister

The Underarm looks most natural to me. The Twist has some issue with the placement of the leg like what Neckbear said.  The BDSM's body feels like it should be more twisted like The Twist although not as much, and it will have similar issue with the placement of the right leg being too far to the right. The Overarm causes perspective issue with the scythe.

Edited August 21, 2016 by Moetal

[Majena]

Alright so I tried a thing

 

@Moetal @laGashetaHardcore

 

Slightly more dynamic.  I couldn't get the skirt pleats quite right =/

[Tackle]

@Moetal

scyther suppose to be a ninja right? X<

another design for pinsir..

(can someone give this a new pair of legs or body? im just borrowed it from the current salamence sprite.)

[McMagister]

Underarm it is then.

 

Also, Starmie

Edited August 21, 2016 by McMagister

[Moetal]

@McMagister

Are you going to work on Staryu also, or what is your plan for Staryu?

[McMagister]

@Moetal

Use the existing Staryu.

[Moetal]

[ZiggyZag]

 

i guess her problem is not her head ... its her body so i made it bigger (I dont know if I made it better ... )

Spoiler

Undead Horsea:

 

Edited August 21, 2016 by ZiggyZag

[Majena]

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