laGashetaHardcore Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 Clefairy Edited [img]http://i60.tinypic.com/2ajsug3.jpg[/img] como esto jigglypuff ?? [img]http://i62.tinypic.com/9blvgz.jpg[/img] susanoomon54 1 Link to comment
HerbBudman Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 I wanted to apologize for sounding as rude as I did. I'm aware that everyone starts somewhere, and I certainly don't want to demotivate anyone with a passion. More of what I meant was hoping the standard wouldn't be lowered to avoid critiquing or denying something that didn't produce the quality of previous entries. So, I'm sorry for coming off as mean. Never abandon a passion, strive for better and do what you enjoy. Best of luck to everyone. I'm always excited to see new releases of this hack. Keep up the hard work everyone!. Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 19, 2015 Author Share Posted September 19, 2015 @Hardcore I feel like your Para is really nice, but I still think she is too large as a first stage pokemon. The face and shading are very nicely done though; Shrink the body a bit, shade the basket, and soften/reline the outline and we'll be good to go. Your Parasect's face scares me, and I'm not fond of that half-transparent skirt. Same as Para, I feel your basket is a bit flat. Clefairy's feet look a bit pointy. Jiggly's lower body looks a bit wonky. @Crooked Your left leg (her right) looks a bit detached from the lower body. Can you lower and shift right? @Lache I'll work on your Flygon later. Please work on Sentret's back sprite. EDIT: EDIT 2: Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 (edited) attempt of Rhyhorn?? Moetal podría cambiar piernas para Paras ?? No puedo reducir el cuerpo a menos que cambie algo así que los pies? El jigglypuff por lo que se ve menos retorcida ?? Parasect? Edited September 19, 2015 by Musica Once again, please use English translations, and make use of the edit option. Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 19, 2015 Author Share Posted September 19, 2015 (edited) Moved front's eyes up. Less uguu looking? @Hardcore Still too big on Para, see below size for scale. Parasect's face doesn't really fit. Polish Clefairy and Jiggy and the backsprites for Para/Parasect when you have time. Edited September 19, 2015 by Moetal Link to comment
TheBurningBlue Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 (edited) Moved front's eyes up. Less uguu looking? Her eyes look a little too different on the front sprite and back sprite. On the back they look a bit derpy, imo. Here's what I consider slightly better: Edited September 19, 2015 by TheBurningBlue Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 (edited) @Moetal/Burning You're both missing an important flaw in the sprite: shiny has 17 colors. Edit: Fixed. @Hardcore Speaking of too many colors, I've noticed a lot of your sprites have more than 16 colors. Don't forget GBA Pokemon sprites can't have more than 16 colors total. I can help you with narrowing down palettes, if you want. Edited September 19, 2015 by Kickern TheBurningBlue 1 Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 (edited) @moetal Better? Edit: Concepts for tentacool i really like (They came up while i was looking for poliwhirl gijinkas.) [Spoiler][/SPOILER] Edited September 19, 2015 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 @Kickern Sure you can help backsprite de Para / Secta [img]http://i60.tinypic.com/2s7z05j.jpg[/img][img]http://i57.tinypic.com/5an7g5.jpg[/img] edit face of Parasect [img]http://i61.tinypic.com/ixflo9.jpg[/img] Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 (edited) Been messing with this all morning x.x Opinions? The purple background was getting to me x.x Edited September 19, 2015 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 (edited) Pero No pulido bronceado Clefairy y jigglypuff de lo contrario mira lo que encontre [spoiler][/spoiler] Edited September 19, 2015 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 19, 2015 Author Share Posted September 19, 2015 @Crooked I prefer to keep current Tentacool. Consider taking elements from Hardcore's. I particularly likes the swimsuit lines for Poliwhirl, and maybe convert the big eyes into hairbuns. @Burning/Kickern Anything else you can do for Shedgod? TheBurningBlue 1 Link to comment
Kelarr Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 Where the Wailord at Link to comment
MarinoKadame Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 (edited) I don't know about gen 5 but this audino gijinka look great to me. [spoiler][/spoiler] This one could work for the mega audino if they are ever done. [spoiler][/spoiler] Speaking of Mega this is a neat Mega Banette here. [spoiler][/spoiler] Edited September 19, 2015 by MarinoKadame Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 (edited) @Moetal It still has 17 colors on shiny. @Marino We're only going up to gen 3 because this is a Fire Red patch. Madoka Audino is cute, though. And chibi Mega Audino is super cute. @Hardcore I fixed the color palettes and problems with some of the sprites being weirdly resized. I used the older version of Parasect, my bad. Edited September 19, 2015 by Kickern Link to comment
KingRechey Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 @Moetal is it fine i help with moemons in future im still settleing in to my new place and if i get chance or any moemons u need work on i could help but meh please dont respond mean im worried to even posting here again i used to make art and sprites for ppl in past and ik how make moemons very well but ur choice idm. Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 19, 2015 Author Share Posted September 19, 2015 @Kickern FFS. Upload it in fixed as 256x64 please. Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 @moetal So add the poliwhirl lines to poliwrath? Also im trying to figure out what you mean by making them buns, like scrap the eye idea all together? Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 (edited) Moetal cómo se marchaban mis sprites ?? Edited September 19, 2015 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 @CrookedWings I think he means the vertical stripes on the swimsuit. Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 19, 2015 Share Posted September 19, 2015 @kickern yeah ^-^" Sorry i worded that oddly. im just confused about the hair part. Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 19, 2015 Author Share Posted September 19, 2015 (edited) @Kickern Thanks @Crooked [spoiler][/spoiler] Edited September 19, 2015 by Moetal Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 19, 2015 Author Share Posted September 19, 2015 @Crooked Work on backsprite/other in the family. Link to comment
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