NaughtyNature Posted June 6, 2015 Share Posted June 6, 2015 (edited) @NaughtyNature So you want something like this? http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=19280001 [spoiler] [/spoiler] http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=6664157 [spoiler] [/spoiler] However, Houndoom was one of the first "new" sprites I saw in moemon, and one of the first that really impressed me, so she has a soft spot in my heart. The second one's the nicer of the two. http://lunikat.deviantart.com/art/Houndoom-Render-329500500 Moar examplez~ (shouldn't be too lewd) __________ http://img1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20140213000507/creepypasta/images/a/a0/Succubus_by_ofskysociety-d6l23ej.jpg https://vaipui.files.wordpress.com/2012/01/succubus-bad-girl-fire.jpg?w=648 http://cdn.wall-pix.net/albums/art-3Dview/00031112.succubus.jpg http://dypsomaniart.deviantart.com/art/succubus-160894758 http://maevachan.deviantart.com/art/Succubus-97797106 http://sangrde.deviantart.com/art/Midnight-Succubus-519147987 __________ Honestly though I think I'd like the current sprite just fine if the clothes were streamlined a little (A little sleeker, and elongate the torso by a pixel or two?), the horns were curved back more and not awkwardly off to the side, and the bow was removed. Edited June 6, 2015 by NaughtyNature Link to comment
Moetal Posted June 6, 2015 Author Share Posted June 6, 2015 (edited) @Magi Lord Helix looks good. Her hands (both) are a bit ambiguous though, so maybe you can redefine them a bit better. EDIT: Maybe you can fix up the shading/mouth and her left eye (our right) also, since it looks kinda uguu now that I stare at it for too long. Mankey's shirt/gloves/stocking confuses me. I have trouble distinguishing whether it's a sleeveless shirt + long gloves that shows a bit of her skin around the bicep, or t-shirt with long gloves that goes all the way in because of the dissimilar tones to her face. Besides that, I feel the "gloves" are too long and will probably look better if it only extend to the forearm. Primeape's new face looks good. Tune up Primeape's palette (namely skin and hair) and update her hairstyle/hairshading to match Mankey's, Edited June 6, 2015 by Moetal Link to comment
Xirix Posted June 6, 2015 Share Posted June 6, 2015 I've only recently been introduced to Moemon, shame it took me so long as I'm fond of cute stuff in general. Just wondering, is there somewhere I can get spritesheets of all the revised Gen1-3 sprites? I haven't made any perlers in a while and I wouldn't mind making a moemon or two. Link to comment
Moetal Posted June 6, 2015 Author Share Posted June 6, 2015 I can't go any whiter without losing quality. Link to comment
NaughtyNature Posted June 6, 2015 Share Posted June 6, 2015 I've only recently been introduced to Moemon, shame it took me so long as I'm fond of cute stuff in general. Just wondering, is there somewhere I can get spritesheets of all the revised Gen1-3 sprites? I haven't made any perlers in a while and I wouldn't mind making a moemon or two. I haven't seen one. I kinda like it though, adds some of the original appeal in hunting down and logging the variety/species all over again. I can't go any whiter without losing quality. Thought it was supposed to be silver until I read the white thing XD Silver charizard still looks nice :3 Link to comment
McMagister Posted June 7, 2015 Share Posted June 7, 2015 (edited) @Moetal Re: Helix: Not sure what you expect with hands of that size (although I tried), mouth shading is a technique I learned from Aozane's Vaporeon. Protip, don't stare at sprites too much. Re: Mankey: Think of it as zettai ryouiki, the arm version. Still, I don't really disagree with you about the gloves. Re: Primeape: I have no interest in updating Primape any further, nor do I presume I could do a better job than Aozane. @Xirix Download the zip file called "McMagister's Collection of Moemon Sprites" in the first page, combine that with my deviantart http://cmagister.deviantart.com/and you will have all the sprites used in the rom plus a lot of older sprites. Edited June 7, 2015 by McMagister Kamigoroshi 1 Link to comment
Moetal Posted June 7, 2015 Author Share Posted June 7, 2015 (edited) I have no interest in updating Primape any further [spoiler][/spoiler] No changes to Mankey. Updated Primeape palette and hairstyle. Added shading to hair. Edited June 7, 2015 by Moetal Link to comment
McMagister Posted June 7, 2015 Share Posted June 7, 2015 @Moetal A dark vertical line above her left (our right) eyebrow, looks like a copy-paste error? Omastar axx, Kamigoroshi and NaughtyNature 3 Link to comment
Moetal Posted June 7, 2015 Author Share Posted June 7, 2015 (edited) @Magi I've actually glitched the hair shading with the skin tone. Hopefully the shiny isn't going be weird or hard to fix. EDIT: Patch 1.5 [spoiler] [/spoiler] Golduck is missing backsprite. Khan is missing an updated backsprite. Doduo, Hoothoot and Togepi line are not up to standard. NidoranF line needs to be reviewed. NidoranM line postponed. Lache's Flygon is cute, but out of place at the moment. Family needs to be reviewed. Anything else I am missing? Edited June 7, 2015 by Moetal Acidella and NaughtyNature 2 Link to comment
McMagister Posted June 7, 2015 Share Posted June 7, 2015 (edited) @Moetal Primeape's hair is worse. The original sprite's hair looks like there are many tiny tufts of hair, while my Mankey's hair is made of fewer larger locks of hair. The two are different and one size does not fit all, or in other words there is no need to change the hair to look like Mankey's. Colours are fine. Current "shortlist" [spoiler] Rattata line Pidgey line Spearow Ekans line Pikachu line Nidoran female line NIdoran male line Abra line Drowzee line Krabby line Koffing line Mr. Mime Electabuzz Pinsir Gyarados Ditto Porygon/Porygon 2 Omanyte line Kabuto line (In progress) Newly added to the list Diglett line Mankey Doduo line Onix Bellsprout line Legendary bird trio + Mewtwo Hitmonlee Hitmonchan Starmie Bellossom Sudowoodo Pineco Whismur line Shellder line Seaking Sentret line Wurmple line Mawile Makuhita line Sharpedo Donphan [/spoiler] Edited June 28, 2015 by McMagister Acidella 1 Link to comment
Moetal Posted June 7, 2015 Author Share Posted June 7, 2015 (edited) And patch completed. You can find the link to the new patch on first page, as usual. Edited June 7, 2015 by Moetal Link to comment
katosen27 Posted June 7, 2015 Share Posted June 7, 2015 Huzzah! New patch! :D Now if only there were a catch all pokemon version of this! Link to comment
Ignitehawk Posted June 7, 2015 Share Posted June 7, 2015 (edited) Huzzah! New patch! :D Now if only there were a catch all pokemon version of this! If OtherPlayers sees that there's been an update, he'll probably update his new Emerald 386 patch to match. The thread says it's likely to take a week or two for him to notice the update and make the patch, but it should happen eventually. Edited June 8, 2015 by Ignitehawk Link to comment
katosen27 Posted June 8, 2015 Share Posted June 8, 2015 If OtherPlayers sees that there's been an update, he'll probably update his new Emerald 386 patch to match. The thread it's likely to take a week or two for him to notice the update and make the patch, but it should happen eventually. Oh hey, cool! Thanks! Link to comment
McMagister Posted June 8, 2015 Share Posted June 8, 2015 Omastar back sprite Doduo Edit susanoomon54, Acidella, Kamigoroshi and 2 others 5 Link to comment
Moetal Posted June 9, 2015 Author Share Posted June 9, 2015 (edited) @Magi Minor hair edit for the backsprite. The backsprite's helmet frontal part looks a bit thin as oppose to the frontsprite's/overall feeling of the helmet. Tried editing the hand. The backsprite's pose is actually different from the front's, but whatever. Logically speaking, her shoulder should be higher up for both front and backsprite if she is using her arms as support. If not, her arms should look more relaxed, so try bending them slightly (from straight 180 degree to 160 or something). Edited June 9, 2015 by Moetal NaughtyNature and susanoomon54 2 Link to comment
McMagister Posted June 9, 2015 Share Posted June 9, 2015 (edited) @Moetal Dodrio edit -> Edited June 9, 2015 by McMagister susanoomon54 1 Link to comment
Kamigoroshi Posted June 9, 2015 Share Posted June 9, 2015 Re: Dodrio ... Truthfully, I actually really liked that aloof Kuudere expression of the left Dodrio. So it's kind of sad to see her transform into what looks like a Genki Girl to me. Kuudere deserve moar love! :( Link to comment
Moetal Posted June 9, 2015 Author Share Posted June 9, 2015 (edited) @Magi I added a bit to the ponytail of the backsprite to make it look more connected to her head. You should either redo that addition, or move the ponytail down a few pixels. The old Dodrio face looks more fitting. The newer face looks too young and too Chaika-like. Salvage it for something else. You kind of changed her back/side hairstyle, and I personally feel it's a bit out of place now because of the length of the "spikes"/how far they spread. Remove all those spike and comb them back into the braid or shorten it back to the original length. [spoiler][ Chaika face? Chaika face. [/spoiler] Edited June 10, 2015 by Moetal Link to comment
McMagister Posted June 9, 2015 Share Posted June 9, 2015 @Moetal Omanyte's ponytail from the design, I believe is threaded through a tight hole inside the shell helmet. Based on the original design and the front sprite, I think the current height of the ponytail matches. I agree the winglets and the braid are too much, so I removed the winglets. I understand Kami and Moetal's sentiments, but not changing the face. Not when I am nearing my personal epitome of moe. Link to comment
animeloverxX93 Posted June 9, 2015 Share Posted June 9, 2015 Well... I personally prefered that Kuudere expression as well, to be honest. :/ I can see where Magi is coming from though. Actually, I thought of the blushing cheeks being a bit too much, and I prefered the old fan and hair style, too. It made Dodrio look slightly intimidating, which I think is being relatively fitting. But that's just my own opinion here, I like the sprite work and concepts I've been observing here (including my time as a lurker) verymuch, as these are high-quality sprites. I probably couldn't pull off something like that, so you have my thanks. Everyone who has submitted art that got accepted by people having a good sense for creativity and pixel art. :) Link to comment
CyrusZathen Posted June 10, 2015 Share Posted June 10, 2015 (edited) I want this :c it look kawaii/sassy Edit: Legendary bird trio Only mewtwo exist in pokemmo o/ Edited June 10, 2015 by CyrusZathen Link to comment
Moetal Posted June 10, 2015 Author Share Posted June 10, 2015 (edited) @Magi Variation 1 - Moved head to make it look more natural, changed mouth Variation 2 - Same as variation 1, just different mouth Variation 3 - Old face pasted on your edit. Pick your poison Edited June 10, 2015 by Moetal Kamigoroshi 1 Link to comment
Ignitehawk Posted June 10, 2015 Share Posted June 10, 2015 (edited) Concerning Doduo: The shading on 1 looks really nice, and the bluer eye color helps bring out the blush a little more while matching the sleeves of the dress. I vote that one. Edited June 10, 2015 by Ignitehawk Link to comment
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