[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)

[Asakano]

I'll upload mine tomorrow actually, It's really late here and I need to get some sleep

[RIOH007]

Done

[Asakano]

I fail at art and when I tried editing this on my computer it started looking like shit, but this is my idea on what could be an Ekans without any color

pls dont hate me ;-;

[spoiler]

[/spoiler]

[McMagister]

@RIOH

That.. actually looks decent apart from a few anatomy issues.  But the design doesn't have any Exeggcute feel and she looks psycho, intentional?

 

@Asakano

There's barely any design to speak of, let alone resembling an Ekans.

Edit: I guess you wanted something like this?

[spoiler]

[/spoiler]

 

@Moetal

 

 

Edit:

edits of Rache's Pidgey

[Asakano]

@Asakano

There's barely any design to speak of, let alone resembling an Ekans.

Edit: I guess you wanted something like this?

[spoiler]

[/spoiler]

Pretty much

[Moetal]

@Magi
I still want my silly hat Pidgey. The body can stay the same, but I want dat hat from my previous reference sheet.

Something is off with Gengar's backsprite's grin, but I can't put my finger on it.

[CaptainSpectacular]

 

 

Something is off with Gengar's backsprite's grin, but I can't put my finger on it. 

I'ts too low down on the face, move it up a pixel all the way around, maybe 2

[RIOH007]

@Magi
The ding isn't complete yet the face is going to be changed and the face expression too sorry it looks psychological and evil its just a draft and I am going to add more stuff so it feels like its an exegcute
PS. It will be in the bottom part of her shell like in the other desing i posted

One question wat is the sprite you have in fire red of jolteon

[CaptainSpectacular]

One question wat is the sprite you have in fire red of jolteon

It love this sprite btw

[RIOH007]

Ok thanks I asked just in case they have changed the sprite

[Moetal]

@RIOH

Is this you? http://shikonari89.deviantart.com/

Please don't post your artworks from two years ago and pretend it's a new drawing for a design. I don't want to see your old work when it's not related to moemon (and you didn't even change anything to it). Avoid double posting if you can; edit your older post. I'm letting you know I'm getting annoyed by it. 

[RIOH007]

Well I told its going to be changed didn't I oh well

[Moetal]

@RIOH

Words are meaningless. I can post a blank picture and say I'm going to draw it later and it's going to be super amazing etc, but will that be acceptable? Can you turn in your homework blank and say you will do them next year? Think about what you are doing please.

[RIOH007]

Idk about this ohh well

[McMagister]

@Moetal

 

Pidgey design is Rache's so its up to her to decide whether she wants the hat or not.

 

Edit:

Geodude (based on crino-line's design http://crino-line.deviantart.com/art/Moemon-Geodude-line-453358225 )

[Moetal]

@Magi
I think Geodude's face is too long. Move the chin up and add a bit of neck, or move the rest of the head down and shorten the face.

[McMagister]

@Moetal

I do believe that the lack of a neck rather than the length of the face is the problem here.  Changed a few other things as well.

 

@RIOH

You're an art thief aren't you?  You'd have a hard time convincing me that the pic you deleted and your most recent upload are done by the same person.

[McMagister]

@RIOH

Well you did take it down and admitted guilt so as far as I'm concerned I'm fine with it.

 

Back sprite.  Snubull base, if you look carefully.

[Moetal]

@Magi
I still think the front face can still be shortened by one pixel. Make a variation and put them side by side to compare.

The backsprite looks good except for the part above the eye; it has hair color between the eye and the eyebrow for some reason. I feel the left hairball and top half braid should be hidden behind the top of the head instead of being on top of it.

I'm an art thief as far as the term itself goes. I take art/pic/sprites from other people and use and/or edit without permission all the time, and I don't feel guilty about it. However, I don't run around claiming it as my own. That's where it draws the line for me. We need a new term for people who takes art and claims as their own, like 'art pretender' or something.

Edit: Try moving the eyes up by one pixel too. Back is good.

Edit 2: The chin and eye variation looks good.

[McMagister]

@Moetal

 

I think art theft describes what you are talking about quite nicely, what is more disturbing is that the same term 'theft' can be applied to derivative works made without permission from the original creator due to how copyright works.  For example we are all infringing Game Freak's copyright right now.

 

Edit:

moar variations

[CaptainSpectacular]

@Magi

 

I know, my opinion doesn't matter as much as Moetals, but personally, I like the second variation the best, although the eyes are just one pixel too far down...

 

EDIT: Now that you have more, I'd have to go with 5

[Moetal]

@Magi

I am siding more towards four personally, but both four and five looks good. I'm going to show the original artist and see what she thinks.

 

@Captain

I take all comments seriously. If you have an opinion, feel free to say it.

[McMagister]

@RIOH

IANAL, but rom hacks like moemon, flora sky, touhoumon, are considered derivative works and under some countries* copyright law, it is considered infringement to create derivative works without the copyright owner's permission.  That said, since this isn't used for commercial purposes, it might fall under fair use but the only way to truly find out is to get sued by GF.

 

More discussion here: http://www.pokecommunity.com/showthread.php?t=297072

 

* http://www.law.cornell.edu/uscode/text/17/106

 

 

Personally, I'm not worried, its just that copyright law sucks.

 

 

Graveler (and slight size reduction)

[RIOH007]

@Magi
it does suck

[Moetal]

@Magi

 

 

The first set looks more appropriate imo. It feels like she gained confidence as she evolved. The second set she turns from hotblood into confidence, so it doesn't feel as good as the first.