Moetal Posted September 24, 2016 Author Share Posted September 24, 2016 We must go wider. Link to comment
McMagister Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) Wider, normal version Edit: congrats on 200 pages. Edited September 24, 2016 by McMagister Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) @Moetal Anymore edits on the poli family before i get back to the horsea line? Also if anyone has any suggestions on swampert it'd be much appreciated. Im feeling iffy about her legs being boring and just her overall design. Or we could trash it. Edited September 24, 2016 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) Happy 200 pages :DD Spoiler Edited September 24, 2016 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
McMagister Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 I think the Rayquaza tail should be incorporated into the ponytail. Link to comment
Tackle Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) 20 hours ago, CrookedWings427 said: @Moetal Anymore edits on the poli family before i get back to the horsea line? Also if anyone has any suggestions on swampert it'd be much appreciated. Im feeling iffy about her legs being boring and just her overall design. Or we could trash it. i am more fond on the old swampert sprite..it just need some adjustment? so i try... i mixed the face of the old swampert and the body of your swampert.. and give it an outfit that suit her type feel free to edit this one if someone can.. Edited September 24, 2016 by Tackle Link to comment
McMagister Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) Scizor back sprite Edited September 24, 2016 by McMagister burningscarlet 1 Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 @McMagister the boobs look a bit square :p Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 @McMagister Oh man, Scizor looks ripped in her back sprite with those stomach muscles. It doesn't really reflect the front sprite. I don't care which way it goes, either a muscular or a smooth stomach on her. I vote for the right Misdreavus, its hair makes her look more like the original Pokemon. I am rather curious, though, about why she's holding a lamp? Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 @Kickern the lamp looks cute :P and it is only a complement for the ghost type Tail Ponytail? Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 24, 2016 Author Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) @CrookedWings427 The backsprite feels like it could have a bit darker outline around the front bang/top of the head. The backsprite mouth feels like it could be larger (wider). The blush should not use two color tones, and looks too low or wrong position. Remove the dither shading for the hair. We don't use dither. -> Easier to edit than to explain. The neck/lower face of the backsprite still look odd to me, but not sure how to correct. Both front and back face looks uguu to me. Edited September 24, 2016 by Moetal Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) @Moetal O-o "uguu" so rude delete the 17 color Edited September 24, 2016 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 @laGashetaHardcore laGashetaHardcore 1 Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) @Kickern What do you think about this? Edited September 24, 2016 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
Moetal Posted September 24, 2016 Author Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) @McMagister The backsprite's hair looks a lot smoother and trimmed when compared to the frontsprite's. The front is a lot more wild looking and is actually split in between on the top, while the backsprite's hair is completely smooth like a balloon. Either one is fine to be honest, but they need to sync better. Also the backsprite's scissor arm is a bit odd - not because of the execution, but the "action" itself looks unnatural. @laGashetaHardcore Uguu is the correct word though. See below for your reference. Spoiler "AM I KAWAII? UGUU~" Edited September 24, 2016 by Moetal Link to comment
McMagister Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 @Moetal B. Also, you can't say uguu and not explain yourself. Image macros don't suffice. Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) @McMagister@Moetal the correct word is DERP Spoiler Poliwrath is a Kawaii derp girl Edited September 24, 2016 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) @laGashetaHardcore Paras needs more work to get the tentacles out: Also, her hands and feet look stubby. Wailmer looks rather small for being a whale, IMO. "Poliwhrat" Do you mean POLIWHIRL or POLIWRATH? Edited September 24, 2016 by Kickern CrookedWings427 1 Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) @Kickern tentacles? she is a circle :p but Wailmer is little Spoiler POLIWRATH Is only a gramatical error, leave me alone ;-; and Masquerain? Edited September 24, 2016 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
Septentrion Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) 27 minutes ago, Kickern said: Wailmer looks rather small for being a whale, IMO. I thought the plan was to redo Wailord completely as the biggest moemon. We might as well redo old Wailord for Wailmer. Edited September 24, 2016 by Septentrion CrookedWings427 and Kickern 2 Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) Made edits to all 3 Looking for criticism I agree about the face But not sure if this is better Edited September 24, 2016 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
laGashetaHardcore Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) @CrookedWings427 Horsea is okay Seadra the head need be redo again Kingdra the eyes are DERP :p Poliwrath use my edit in your face :p @Kickern I have so much sprites of we never use Edited September 24, 2016 by laGashetaHardcore Link to comment
Kickern Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) @CrookedWings427 On Kingdra's back sprite, her chest looks like it needs to be tilted more towards the direction her face is uh... facing. On Seadra, how wide are her sleeves? On the back sprite, her sleeve looks really wide, but on the front sprite, the sleeve is not as wide. @laGashetaHardcore I dunno, Masquerain's foot looks like it should be underneath her butt more. Does she need the wings when the bow already represents them? Or vice-versa? Edited September 24, 2016 by Kickern Link to comment
CrookedWings427 Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 (edited) @Moetal Ok i think i got most edits down here Not sure if the problem with poliwhirl is fixed Also not sure if this face fixed the problem. @Kickern Last post for today Happy 200 pages and 5000 posts :) Edited September 24, 2016 by CrookedWings427 Link to comment
Zawerni Posted September 24, 2016 Share Posted September 24, 2016 An attempt at making her hair look less like a tentacle coming off the back of her head. I feel the eyes on her head are unnecessary since she already has Rayquaza's eye color. burningscarlet 1 Link to comment
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