[IPS] Moemon Fire Red Revival Project (Updated 9-17-2019)

[IratePomegranate]

@ZiggyZag

 

Nice. New backsprite mouth is great and I agree that the old eyes fit Sharpedo more.

 

EDIT:

 

 

Darkened the blues a bit to fit more with Sharpedo's actual colours, looking back I over-lightened them last time. lightened and intensified both purples to make the hair more vibrant without messing with the stockings too much. Also lengthened the backsprite fin and changed a few pixels in the hair to try and make things look a bit smoother.

Edited November 15, 2016 by IratePomegranate

[laGashetaHardcore]

@ZiggyZag @irate88

 Oh god I love you guys, I am trying to make Sharpedo more moe <3

Edited November 15, 2016 by laGashetaHardcore

[IratePomegranate]

@laGashetaHardcore

 

Glad to hear it. Sharpedo's one of my favourite Pokemon so it's natural I'd want to work on the Moemon version.

 

Also admiral's peaked cap. Yay or nay?

 

[Jonikari]

@IratePomegranate Definitely yay.

[GetRekdm8]

@IratePomegranate Looks good but for some reason the hat looks massive in the front sprite to me (taller, anyway). In the backsprite from the bottom to the top it's about as tall as her face is (the front of the hat),  whereas in the front sprite the part where the yellow "X" is looks like it is raised higher than it should be. Idk think it might be the angle and I'm just imagining things.

[IratePomegranate]

Now that I look at it I see it too. I'll try and squash the front sprite's hat a bit.

 

EDIT: Hat status: Squashed.

 

 

DOUBLE EDIT: Adjusted the hat shape.

 

Edited November 17, 2016 by IratePomegranate

[CrookedWings427]

Made some edits

[Swirly]

The frontsprite's face looks a bit odd and squished. It might just be the mouth though.

[laGashetaHardcore]

@CrookedWings427

for me the face is okay, the rest of edits are good

[IratePomegranate]

Some science, feel free to pick and choose what bits are better.

 

 

Added the eyepatch band to the backsprite

Re-added the background cuff on the front sprite because she looks like she's missing an arm to me without it.

I used the old face because I'm lazy, adjusted the eye shape to give the same effect as the eyebrows without squashing the face.

Darkened the remaining red so that it doesn't miss the other one as much.

De-intensified and darkened the darkest blue to blend better with the hair as an outline and bring out the lines on the clothes more.

Adjusted the shoulders of the backsprite, pulled the background arm a pixel to the left.

Did my own messing around with the hip thingies.

 

 

Edited November 18, 2016 by IratePomegranate

[CrookedWings427]

@IratePomegranate

Everything looks good other than her face and the shading on the white part of the legs.

If you dont want her to be moe i think she should at least have a pretty/seductive face. I think part of it is the eyes shine being in the middle x.x that always kills me. 

Also the face is pretty small. But it also looks like its missing something. Probably why i always add noses. 

 

Minor edit suggestions:

The shading in her hair near the arm in her backsprite is kinda blocky. 

Is that black block on her backsprites arm a design or is it suppose to be folds in her sleeve? 

 

Edit

I think Graveler is a decent reference for the face im talking about. 

 

 

 

 

Edited November 19, 2016 by CrookedWings427

[IratePomegranate]

@CrookedWings427

 

How's this?

 

The new head's a little spherical and the face is off (probably because I'm used to looking at the old one so much) but everything I try ends up making her look like this guy:

 

Spoiler

Fixed the blocky hair and removed the black cuffline as I messed up while sciencing everything together before. Tried shading the stockings too but that went nowhere fast aside from near the shorts.
 

[Moetal]

In attempt to fix her face, I've turned her into baby face. Not good.

[CrookedWings427]

I like both faces actually ._.

[IratePomegranate]

@Moetal

 

Well its a definite improvement to the face shape at least.

 

[REDSANDY]

Hi, I'm new here, and I joined just for this. Where would I go to download the latest version of the moemon project?

[notmudkip0]

23 minutes ago, REDSANDY said:

Hi, I'm new here, and I joined just for this. Where would I go to download the latest version of the moemon project?

Download link is in the OP

[REDSANDY]

Thank you!

and er.... sorry to be nub, but what is the op?

[notmudkip0]

Just now, REDSANDY said:

Thank you!

and er.... sorry to be nub, but what is the op?

The first post in the thread

[REDSANDY]

thankyou so much :)

 

[laGashetaHardcore]

playing again

hair?

[Moetal]

@laGashetaHardcore

2 3 and 4 are neat. The rest are meh. The hair to the left side seems really close to the face though (need more volume)

[Maelstrom]

I like the drill hair (the third)

[laGashetaHardcore]

@Moetal

[DekuSkrub]

For a while i was wondering why the thread was so silent. And then i remembered Sun and Moon, and stopped wondering.