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[Poem] Touch

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Such a haunting and helpless feeling it is to long for a thing out of reach, out of touch. Why long for such a banal thing as a touch? The logical mind would surmise that a touch of the mind would be satisfactory. The physicality of any touch would seem superfluous, needless, senseless. Not a necessary aspect of human interaction.

 

What is an existence if not a conscious one? How, with all the complexities of the mind of the individual, does a single desire manage to seem so overwhelming?

 

A touch of the thought would never equate a touch of the hand.

 

EDIT: Haterz gun hate

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Such a haunting and helpless feeling it is to long for a thing out of reach, out of touch. Why long for such a banal thing as a touch? The logical mind would surmise that a touch of the mind would be satisfactory. The physicality of any touch would seem superfluous, needless, senseless. Not a necessary aspect of human interaction.

 

What is an existence if not a conscious one? How, with all the complexities of the mind of the individual, does a single desire manage to seem so overwhelming?

 

A touch of the thought would never equate a touch of the hand.

 

EDIT: Haterz gun hate

 

That's the kinda thing I narrate to my cat at 3 am.

Hate to be that guy, but, uh, that underlined part should be "too."

 

I'll just... put my nazi hat back on and back out.

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That's the kinda thing I narrate to my cat at 3 am.

Hate to be that guy, but, uh, that underlined part should be "too."

 

I'll just... put my nazi hat back on and back out.

Actually, no. I was using the infinitive form of the verb "to long". Are you sure your nazi hat isn't a dunce hat?

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Actually, no. I was using the infinitive form of the verb "to long". Are you sure your nazi hat isn't a dunce hat?

 

Oh wow, you're right.

I kept reading it as "too long" and assuming you weren't smart.

 

I guess I'll just put the cap back in hammerspace and bite the cyanide tab.

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