OU tier team

[kwstyouAS]

hey guys, thinking about starting playing comp and idk how my team will do. do i have to change something and if yes then what? thank you

 

gengar         life orb    

                  shadow ball
                  focus blast
                   substitute
                  energy ball

garchomp     life orb   

                   earthquake
                   dragon claw
                  stone edge
                  stealth rock

magnezone     choice specs    

                  volt switch 
                  thunderbolt
                  hidden power fire
                  flash cannon

starmie      life orb/ choice scarf

                  surf
                  ice beam
                  psyshock
                  rapid spin/trick

crobat        black sludge  

                  u-turn
                 brave bird
                 roost
                 taunt/defog

jolteon        life orb   

                   thunderbolt
                  volt switch
                  signal beam
                   hidden power ice

 

i also have a timid lucario timid zoroark jolly infernape and jolly salamence ( no egg moves on either of those)

[LifeStyleNORE]

For starters, you are missing EV spreads.

 

Now the most important part of any Rate My Team threads:

- Why did you think of this team?

- What do you hope to accomplish with it?

- What is/are your wincon(s)?

- Why did you pick each of these mons and what are their roles in the team?

- What do you feel are the main weaknesses to this team? (you actually need to play to answer this)

- etc

[kwstyouAS]

30 minutes ago, LifeStyleNORE said:

For starters, you are missing EV spreads.

 

Now the most important part of any Rate My Team threads:

- Why did you think of this team?

- What do you hope to accomplish with it?

- What is/are your wincon(s)?

- Why did you pick each of these mons and what are their roles in the team?

- What do you feel are the main weaknesses to this team? (you actually need to play to answer this)

- etc

1,4) i chose this team/each of these mons bcs i want to make a team based on pokemon that i like. for example crobat is not a ou and i could easily replace him for something better but i like crobat as a pokemon so i want him in my team. 

2) since im just starting and i dont have the exp i just want to win like 1 out of 3 times or 1/2 when i get the exp . ik winning a tourney is probably impossible with this team but i dont mind.

3) i feel like every pokemon in my team is my wincon which i rly like,i dont have to setup and i just focus on pokemon types (havent rly played comp so maybe im wrong but that was my thought when i started breeding these mons)

5)main weaknesses i would say setup sweepers and normal type walls? as you said i need to play to be able to answer that so maybe im wrong. i did play a couple matches in pokemon showdown while i was breeding in pokemmo and it felt pretty good even tho i lost some of my matches.

and for my evs everything is 6hp, 252atk or 252spatk and 252 speed.

 

[soyhector]

On 2/9/2020 at 8:23 AM, kwstyouAS said:

do i have to change something and if yes then what? thank you

i think it isnt as balanced as it should. Just think that any pokemon that boost makes you 6-0. For example volcarona, gyarados, salamance and dragonite +1 dragon dance/quiver dance.

Also see that most your pokes uses lifeorb, you should take advantage of the variety of items. There are so much changes that you must do, so better start again.

I recomend you to think 1st of all which playstyle do you want to play (ofensive, balanced or wally). After that concentrate on "cores" and roles to teambuild and practise a lot of pvp to find out weaknesses on your team and try to improve it.