@daikosa
Wow, I have no words except... Thank you for improving the shading marvelously, specially hair shading (no matter how much I tried, I simply couldn't make it look good), I loved the details on the shoes.
Honestly I'm more fond to longer hair but I can't complain to such amazing improvements you did in the design, maybe it's me but adding red/blue blush makes it look less like... well, blush, but I admit it's an interesting touch. I will let the others judge that.
Lastly, I modified a minor detail: You used a 17th color for the "magnemites" shading. Palettes can't have more than 16 colors, counting background, black and white.