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  1. positive point: I like the dress on rayquaza the way that pattern is used definitely makes it feel like rayquaza constructive criticism: the line that separates those boobs is skewed it looks like one boob is larger than the other, there is no shoulder definition, the arm is too short, there is no line that denotes where the little offshoot piece of the tail ends and where the ankle begins, where is the neck, the tail might be a bit too long and doesn't look like the right size to connect where it does, and finally the head looks cut and pasted a few pixels too far left
  2. @Moetal Is it just me or does the two pixel long line on the backsprite where the nose is look weird?
  3. @Sep actually i think you may be right about the sleeve starting at the elbows Altaria Dragonite Salamence Kingdra and flygon are the evolved dragons latias latios and rayquaza are the non evolving ones Still I must agree with CW I'm not sure how I'd feel about older dragons maybe if we had a comparison of a teen/tween dragon and a 40ish dragon i could agree with you but as is it would look sorely out of place when even the oldest looking pokemon Alakazam looks teen\tween @Nerak Don't lose hope it's coming together quite nicely (i'm not a spriter personally) all I can do is try to offer suggestions and make edits to try to display what I'm talking about. btw this was what I meant by rework the chin (my edit sucks though) i screwed up the bang and made her face a little pudgy but perhaps her mouth can be changed to fix it i dunno
  4. @CW I'm lovin the heracross it totally fits the pokemon i always use heracross whenever possible and now i'm gonna enjoy looking at her so thank you any chance though that you might wanna show a version where the spear ends in the butterfly shape that the horn normally has. @Nerak One thing I can say is that it is obviously zapdos but I think it lacks a few elements that would improve it immensely 1. if you changed the dress into a skirt it would serve a double purpose you could make the legs visible and maybe add some socks that looks more like zapdos' legs and the skirt would look more like zapdos' tail plumage. 2. I'm thinking the arms might look better if you end the sleeves at the elbow. 3. please add definition to the chest area. 4. maybe move the belt in one pixel on both sides she looks pudgy (zapdos is not a pudgy bird) 5. I think the neck might benefit from being moved over one pixel it doesn't look quite centered on her chest 6. It might take some reworking but the straight line at her chin is too pronounced look at CW's Heracross above as an example she has a straight line for the bottom of the face but due to the angle of the face it doesn't seem as pronounced and instead adds to the curvature whereas on zappy the straight line makes the face less feminine and more masculine. Edit: 7. the nose is way too dark and pronounced either remove it completely or rework it lighter maybe I'm not sure. Edit2: I should clarify that when i say make the legs visible I assume she will be sitting like the other legendary birds in hardcores post
  5. @cw the belly on that persian should be moved up one pixel midway along like the source if possible :huh: . the straight line is throwing me off. other than that I'm loving the fact you are giving the meowth line some love thank you. I adjusted it a little may have made it worse
  6. lovin that lileep kickern if you get a chance maybe you can fix aron I never use it cause it's a weird armored baby.
  7. It's true septen I think otherplayers summed it up in his comment up above maybe moetal should add that comment to the OP with an addendum stating that unless your question is directly related to spriting, moemon improvement, or moemon art do not post it here this is not a forum for technical patching issues its a forum of like minded moe lovers who happen to work on a patch. @name1essone dont take it personally but keep in mind that all of us who watch, lurk, and comment on this thread love moemon but only a couple people understand the intricacies of patching most are artists or fans. Asking about technical issues here is like asking a dog to paint Van Gogh's The Starry Night with his buttcheeks, it most likely isn't gonna happen and if you do get something it's most likely gonna seem like s***
  8. I haven't commented in the last 80 something pages not since before magi was undead the first time but I feel I need to comment on this @name1essone don't threaten to argue more if you want it to end. just ignore him or don't but quit ruining this thread with off topic arguments. you asked for help and figured it out yourself we get it stop harping about it and quit instigating things if you'd ignored septentrions last comment it would've been over. @Septentrion name1essone is right he didn't ask you for help and you're dragging this thread away from moe heaven. I've read your comments 3 times and you've been quite rude to someone who just joined maybe rephrase your comments or maybe you don't speak english natively either way heres what should happen you should both just apologize and let everyone get back to their respective tasks. @moetal how has it been i hear magi's undead again? loving the blastoise by the way. I noticed meowth is getting some love I'm psyched i asked magi to give meowth a shot like a year ago it's been hurting and i'm glad it's finally having it's day. All hail moegod Moetal Banzai oh and I believe i can clear up some confusion regarding this white screen that redcloak and theglitchiestmew are having if you attempt to patch a firered Rev A rom with a patch from firered 1.0 it will not work past the oak intro and will freeze each time a call is made to pointers that are located in a different position I ran into this problem when i first started hacking roms my suggestion is to either dump a different cartridge or recreate the patch yourself for the REV A rom. Good luck you two.
  9. honestly rache i think that the moon would look cooler if it was rotated a little and the hand holding the staff feels like maybe its too straight maybe move a couple pixels over to give the illusion of fingers being there
  10. actually moetal I don't think they are shitty at all I really like them thats why I suggested the same nidoran M Edit: Magi My personal belief is he should not look feminine after all there is 0% chance of getting a female nidoran male.
  11. Nidoran [spoiler][/spoiler] Nidorino [spoiler][/spoiler] Nidoran Female [spoiler][/spoiler] Nidorina [spoiler][/spoiler]
  12. I vote athletic male for nidoran line I really like the nidoran moetal asked if could be fixed up waaay back
  13. @magi I saw the gen1 short list and have a single request for it and that is meowth and persian which look like dr frankenstein killed a person and put their head on a cat
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